tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5922803238501809556..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Chokecherry WineFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88442091745041674852012-09-15T02:24:25.997-04:002012-09-15T02:24:25.997-04:00"Look at all the
shit you've done
You wra..."Look at all the<br />shit you've done<br />You wrap your life in rubber bands"<br /><br />So this girl is the "bad seed" you just want to hold and fix and love.<br /><br />The thing about rubber bands is that they are too tight/binding and they eventually break, probably causing someone a lot of pain. Maybe she's tying her hands together, trying to keep from doing more damage to herself and others.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22694631725479345872008-08-23T19:50:00.000-04:002008-08-23T19:50:00.000-04:00Mine too, Tinker. I'm so glad you commented on thi...Mine too, Tinker. I'm so glad you commented on this one. ;-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50260161393827139352008-08-23T02:35:00.000-04:002008-08-23T02:35:00.000-04:00I REALLY love this one! I love all your poetry, bu...I REALLY love this one! I love all your poetry, but this one is one of my faves!rc_girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15743385087668882170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81916251157568962752008-05-13T23:18:00.000-04:002008-05-13T23:18:00.000-04:00Cynthia, you are too sweet by half. Thank you. And...Cynthia, you are too sweet by half. Thank you. And, again, I am really tickled that you gals all liked this...certain of my own poems are very hard for me to see impartially. <BR/><BR/>And Cynthia, what an image i have in my mind of your friend. I'm glad you told me about her.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87625765860291178102008-05-13T22:13:00.000-04:002008-05-13T22:13:00.000-04:00tres cool and original, Shay,I used to know a girl...tres cool and original, Shay,<BR/>I used to know a girl who kept<BR/>her life, a diary on rubber bands,<BR/>writing the day in about on or<BR/>two sentences, all printed on<BR/>different colored rubber bands,<BR/>of course little me became so<BR/>in awe of her, she was an original<BR/>just as you areCynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10598169309616545734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31174395833003971102008-05-10T23:36:00.000-04:002008-05-10T23:36:00.000-04:00Thanks, C. Elizabeth. I wasn't sure if others woul...Thanks, C. Elizabeth. I wasn't sure if others would like this poem, I just knew that I do. It makes me really happy that it resonates for you and Susanna, too.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60060006335606467282008-05-10T22:19:00.000-04:002008-05-10T22:19:00.000-04:00I really enjoyed this, especially the images it cr...I really enjoyed this, especially the images it creates. For me I get a mix of sensuality and painC. Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11957562888440201122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43642744935882809052008-05-10T18:10:00.000-04:002008-05-10T18:10:00.000-04:00Susanna, thank you for your comment, I'm really pl...Susanna, thank you for your comment, I'm really pleased you like this one and can see her. It's a simple poem but I'm partial to it. <BR/><BR/>And yes, that abandoned amusement park always tugged at my imagination and my emotions. Your photographs really made me think of it again.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13777469989465259562008-05-10T14:17:00.000-04:002008-05-10T14:17:00.000-04:00Your poetry really does a paint a picture for me. ...Your poetry really does a paint a picture for me. I can SEE Chokecherry...her mouth, skin, hair...the expression on her face. <BR/><BR/>PS - And your comment to me also painted a picture for me...I can just imagine you walking by that empty amusement park.susannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18241963807438094857noreply@blogger.com