tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6192313259972502795..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Last NightFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65038464583229997062013-02-17T17:22:11.251-05:002013-02-17T17:22:11.251-05:00Really beautiful...reminds me of something someone...Really beautiful...reminds me of something someone said to me a very long time ago, we can be anywhere in the world but still see the same moon.Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12692170857496442623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39906534471819763482013-02-14T22:18:22.562-05:002013-02-14T22:18:22.562-05:00"just caught up, mid-step"
That is awes..."just caught up, mid-step"<br /><br />That is awesome. Catching somebody between personas like that. You can put away the teeth, but always keep the claws handy. At least that's my rule ;-) HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14744390924696831832013-02-14T20:38:40.695-05:002013-02-14T20:38:40.695-05:00Just beautiful! I love, love, love the third stan...Just beautiful! I love, love, love the third stanza!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47072467476011328822013-02-14T19:27:09.614-05:002013-02-14T19:27:09.614-05:00Shay, this sings in my heart...
xoxoxoShay, this sings in my heart...<br />xoxoxoVesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18208417899818401302013-02-14T17:25:03.257-05:002013-02-14T17:25:03.257-05:00There is a longing in this, rich and deep, delicat...There is a longing in this, rich and deep, delicate and yet ravenous. Beautiful write.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46726753331569852222013-02-14T15:15:44.973-05:002013-02-14T15:15:44.973-05:00This has the most delicate lilt and sway. I love ...This has the most delicate lilt and sway. I love the line breaks. Just beautiful.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55900098695064186882013-02-14T15:05:18.891-05:002013-02-14T15:05:18.891-05:00Somebody's in trouble...
Someone forgot someo...Somebody's in trouble...<br /><br />Someone forgot someone...<br /><br />Someone shouldn't have missed their date with this "girl and garland, asleep in the ribbon grass."<br /><br />Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32594300017927930002013-02-14T12:50:26.047-05:002013-02-14T12:50:26.047-05:00Me, too - one of the most beautiful poems ever! Ha...Me, too - one of the most beautiful poems ever! Haunting, kiddo.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89762541119110169892013-02-14T12:08:05.695-05:002013-02-14T12:08:05.695-05:00You always seem to be waiting for a Lover.
Find on...You always seem to be waiting for a Lover.<br />Find one that can read, and wants to be romanced!<br />Someone that deserves to be loved by YOU.<br />(I hope that you didn't fall asleep in the ribbon grass...)G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78591961002531823802013-02-14T12:04:55.344-05:002013-02-14T12:04:55.344-05:00Be' and do obviously! Wow!Be' and do obviously! Wow!Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78657215822068355602013-02-14T12:04:05.419-05:002013-02-14T12:04:05.419-05:00'Blood of what I had to do...be"
Am Your ...'Blood of what I had to do...be"<br />Am Your biggest fan!<br />AlohaCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91274921866221695632013-02-14T12:01:01.364-05:002013-02-14T12:01:01.364-05:00i hear purring...i hear purring...TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11370003765003218182013-02-14T11:20:24.555-05:002013-02-14T11:20:24.555-05:00The eternal question, where are you, where were yo...The eternal question, where are you, where were you, and why are you not here? asked with such soft wistfulness and hard strength that no self-pity intrudes. The speaker knows things are as they are, yet dreams them very differently. I hope the cat returns to purr instead of bite. hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68030382835853071142013-02-14T11:19:20.830-05:002013-02-14T11:19:20.830-05:00These are some of the most beautiful lines of poet...These are some of the most beautiful lines of poetry I've ever read:<br />"there is ... only one for whom I wait softly like this,<br />unguarded,<br />all girl and garland, asleep in the ribbon grass"<br /><br />Gorgeous! You gave me chills. :)<br /><br />And OH, that opening!<br />"I had put away the cat's teeth,<br />and the blood of what I had to be, and do"<br /><br />You are so good. Consistently good. That's really something. To deliver like this every single time.<br /><br />I love this part too:<br />"Soon, the cat will come back,<br />and with her, the harsh edge of all I must do"<br /><br />The best compliment I can give is that I read it four or five times.Alicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09212391351233448784noreply@blogger.com