tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6439995238280224444..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Sappho of The Pharmacy CounterFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50983592341838468032016-05-22T01:27:22.578-04:002016-05-22T01:27:22.578-04:00damn I'm glad I got around to reading this. i ...damn I'm glad I got around to reading this. i have nothing in my tank, so I'm glad you got Sappho to pony up. thanks for playing, Shay ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76385761445307802262016-05-21T14:11:56.724-04:002016-05-21T14:11:56.724-04:00The fourth stanza is just fucking brilliant.The fourth stanza is just fucking brilliant.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22727019856802335642016-05-21T13:47:05.342-04:002016-05-21T13:47:05.342-04:00Oh, this is fabulous. I agree with Hedgewitch that...Oh, this is fabulous. I agree with Hedgewitch that fourth stanza rocks, but I love that first one. lolSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90052376804473353512016-05-21T12:10:16.538-04:002016-05-21T12:10:16.538-04:00Oh, wow. Spectacular! Oh, wow. Spectacular! Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14564599464170948202016-05-21T07:17:18.477-04:002016-05-21T07:17:18.477-04:00parlez black words that shine like ravens in the r...parlez black words that shine like ravens in the rain<br />and I'll kick out this beautiful shit for you<br /><br />Sounds like the best offer anyone could get!<br /><br />I loved this, Shay. Start to finish.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20068385326694952322016-05-20T22:41:02.989-04:002016-05-20T22:41:02.989-04:00That was crazy clever, the way you spun the coat a...That was crazy clever, the way you spun the coat and glasses into a blind ghost. You're such a little smarty. ;)✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42305543475871585162016-05-20T22:31:47.708-04:002016-05-20T22:31:47.708-04:00"Well fuck all you guys. From out my ass, bri..."Well fuck all you guys. From out my ass, brilliance" ... Isn't *that* the truth?!<br /><br />"but keep the glasses and white coat" ... Yes! I completely agree. I'm a fool for glasses (among other things).<br /><br />"and I'll kick out this beautiful shit for you,<br /><br />beautiful, fantastic, fucking feathered perfection for you" ... Yes please. :)<br /><br />Black words that shine like ravens in the rain? Are you kiddin' with this deliciousness?! Your ass poetry is lookin' mighty fine right about now, babydoll. ;) Keep it comin'.<br /><br /><br /><br />✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54473809316567169642016-05-20T17:22:22.255-04:002016-05-20T17:22:22.255-04:00I would think Sappho would be better than pills an...I would think Sappho would be better than pills any time... maybe getting all those words shiny black to paint the world. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71457328874564967122016-05-20T17:06:29.979-04:002016-05-20T17:06:29.979-04:00Love this:
"The sun comes up, doesn't it...Love this: <br />"The sun comes up, doesn't it ever think of anything fresh?" <br /><br />And those shining black words...like a murder of crows. Waiting on a wire. Ready to scavenge something. Or just spread those wordwings and fly. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62255949430227282822016-05-20T16:57:22.143-04:002016-05-20T16:57:22.143-04:00That fourth stanza may be one of the best you ever...That fourth stanza may be one of the best you ever wrote. There's a smile and an an ache to every line here.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com