tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6461273139290659209..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): GirlFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51153767869868774972014-04-03T20:30:36.139-04:002014-04-03T20:30:36.139-04:00Lolamouse is of course correct, though what Catblo...Lolamouse is of course correct, though what Catblossom thinks of a mouse in her lair, I can only wince.<br /><br />As at this girl. Wince. ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60504801101274454162014-04-03T16:42:47.203-04:002014-04-03T16:42:47.203-04:00LOL. This was fun:~)LOL. This was fun:~)Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81825336871400921802014-04-02T11:28:34.040-04:002014-04-02T11:28:34.040-04:00Beware the kiss
From a sultry Miss
And if you'...Beware the kiss<br />From a sultry Miss<br />And if you're young<br />She'll steal your tongue!!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1088869106179253822014-04-02T01:05:08.678-04:002014-04-02T01:05:08.678-04:00Oh, Jim, there are bad girls!! (Lolamouse is on f...Oh, Jim, there are bad girls!! (Lolamouse is on fire, I can't compete).<br /><br />Let's hope this was a fib, as the other girl sounds too sinister to even consider in the first place!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37579792558444621892014-04-01T22:26:25.039-04:002014-04-01T22:26:25.039-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23477204495801823732014-04-01T22:02:45.707-04:002014-04-01T22:02:45.707-04:00Sounds like my kinda woman!Sounds like my kinda woman!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83265106790975094462014-04-01T20:16:08.377-04:002014-04-01T20:16:08.377-04:00Yikes, what a scary broad!
Hope Bosco is doing b...Yikes, what a scary broad! <br /><br />Hope Bosco is doing better this week. Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62658273961699587872014-04-01T19:55:30.130-04:002014-04-01T19:55:30.130-04:00Rich and inviting details leading us into the dark...Rich and inviting details leading us into the dark-and then surprise-so fun to read!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49756521523846842432014-04-01T16:36:39.297-04:002014-04-01T16:36:39.297-04:00That rocks!! xoxoThat rocks!! xoxoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34408026242600723652014-04-01T14:04:42.511-04:002014-04-01T14:04:42.511-04:00Wow! Not nice at all! Snappy, sharp little piece ...Wow! Not nice at all! Snappy, sharp little piece here.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78294854634327241882014-04-01T13:05:08.639-04:002014-04-01T13:05:08.639-04:00Oh my goodness, between your poem and lolamouse...Oh my goodness, between your poem and lolamouse's comment, I am completely intimidated! Brilliant!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74376049917463192502014-04-01T12:59:48.022-04:002014-04-01T12:59:48.022-04:00ouch...rich and dark... :)ouch...rich and dark... :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79814016290201720232014-04-01T12:57:20.053-04:002014-04-01T12:57:20.053-04:00deliciously dark, just the way I like it.deliciously dark, just the way I like it.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20332962187544178072014-04-01T12:23:54.875-04:002014-04-01T12:23:54.875-04:00The passion in darkness...love it!!The passion in darkness...love it!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31439406888552497942014-04-01T10:51:47.192-04:002014-04-01T10:51:47.192-04:00This is the most flawless execution of goatameter ...This is the most flawless execution of goatameter it has ever been my privilege to read.<br /><br />I adore this and give it 5 kisses!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31232243919834963912014-04-01T10:08:02.803-04:002014-04-01T10:08:02.803-04:00you never fail to amaze.you never fail to amaze.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35029751006056216212014-04-01T09:07:45.405-04:002014-04-01T09:07:45.405-04:00ahahah love the rhythm! You'll get all the kis...ahahah love the rhythm! You'll get all the kisses, definitely. :)<br /><br />Here's mine:<br /><br />Kiss.<br /><br /><3Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26924353661958445822014-04-01T08:36:29.819-04:002014-04-01T08:36:29.819-04:00Surreal, macabre, passionate!Surreal, macabre, passionate!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73049728161903525562014-04-01T08:21:45.762-04:002014-04-01T08:21:45.762-04:00I've met that girl--I think my son married her...I've met that girl--I think my son married her once. Whilst I am still laughing from Lolamouse's comment, I do also still feel the sinister, the sense of evil that some people carry behind a front of beauty and smiles. Short, not sweet, but smart.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38950324066932824252014-04-01T08:00:47.510-04:002014-04-01T08:00:47.510-04:00The ease with which you've worked in
hexatonic...The ease with which you've worked in<br />hexatonic goatameter is laudable. I've always found the double inverse Ventetian sonnet a little too punctilious, but you've won me over! I applaud yourvsharp observations about universal health care in alternate universes and your adept mingling of iconic images from religion and string theory. Sheer perfection, Shay! Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34400980232667568492014-04-01T07:34:13.513-04:002014-04-01T07:34:13.513-04:00The italicized "me" added to this perfec...The italicized "me" added to this perfect piece.<br /><br />This early in the morning and you produce THIS? Yikes! I've got to put on some foundation (which I don't have) to color my (now) green face... ;)Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.com