tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6467757370584641326..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): A Ballad In Shades Of RedFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51987105291796220862012-06-21T10:09:24.352-04:002012-06-21T10:09:24.352-04:00That picture is sumptuous, and the words flow acro...That picture is sumptuous, and the words flow across the senses like a heady perfume.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60509936915272431452012-06-20T23:41:48.764-04:002012-06-20T23:41:48.764-04:00Yes, a dance! I LOVED "I keep my head held ...Yes, a dance! I LOVED "I keep my head held shameless high"<br /><br />Passionately tragic, this write.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50440778857854188752012-06-20T13:50:00.563-04:002012-06-20T13:50:00.563-04:00This moves like a formal dance. Just lovely, Shay...This moves like a formal dance. Just lovely, Shay.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41284548648831471002012-06-20T10:11:03.253-04:002012-06-20T10:11:03.253-04:00Wow!Wow!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36130082155034923772012-06-20T05:38:58.429-04:002012-06-20T05:38:58.429-04:00i think Buddah captured it perfectly ~ a romantic ...i think Buddah captured it perfectly ~ a romantic nightmare!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13629303520695044479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11420295688325327252012-06-20T01:36:09.776-04:002012-06-20T01:36:09.776-04:00Nobody writes a romantic nightmare like you, Shay....Nobody writes a romantic nightmare like you, Shay.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26608251716946548312012-06-20T00:15:19.896-04:002012-06-20T00:15:19.896-04:00Yup. No one can write like you. Just sayin'.Yup. No one can write like you. Just sayin'.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50932840566997567502012-06-19T23:12:33.042-04:002012-06-19T23:12:33.042-04:00This poem reminds me of the old folk song, "B...This poem reminds me of the old folk song, "Black Jack Davy." Perhaps that's not the title--it's been over 40 years since I've heard it--but it's sinister-sad, like your poem.<br /><br />Harry Chapin's "The Mayor of Cantor (Lied)" as well...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2524746723359483462012-06-19T23:08:51.656-04:002012-06-19T23:08:51.656-04:00Definitely some fine gothica here, and full of a d...Definitely some fine gothica here, and full of a dark and pearly innocence as well as a grim consciousness of what really goes on in the nobleman's back yard. The contrast just makes it --if you'll excuse the technical terminology--more creepy good.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33587176343296703902012-06-19T23:07:33.258-04:002012-06-19T23:07:33.258-04:00some of your lines are orgasmic,
others are slaps!...some of your lines are orgasmic,<br />others are slaps!<br /><br /><br /> Aloha from Honolulu,<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> > < } } ( ° >Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6111724976137269272012-06-19T22:01:57.960-04:002012-06-19T22:01:57.960-04:00Nice piece! Ever hear of the band mewithoutyou? ...Nice piece! Ever hear of the band mewithoutyou? I think you'd dig their storytelling style...HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.com