tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6545415567365829436..comments2024-03-28T19:48:05.247-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): local girlsFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47806600133080709892014-03-03T11:19:53.150-05:002014-03-03T11:19:53.150-05:00Goodness this is beautiful...there is such a gorge...Goodness this is beautiful...there is such a gorgeous, intimate flow to your words. You always amaze me. Thank you for taking part in the challenge and your kind words and thoughts for Dawn. Please forgive my slow response to your work.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77269433330587832782014-03-01T10:02:08.819-05:002014-03-01T10:02:08.819-05:00I keep looking for ways to say "gorgeous,&quo...I keep looking for ways to say "gorgeous," and "sensual" and "inspired" because I repeat myself w/ every poem you write! Damn, girl, you're too good!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20474190578082315672014-02-28T15:27:54.126-05:002014-02-28T15:27:54.126-05:00whoosh. that little bit... ~whoosh. that little bit... ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18377332851214425252014-02-28T09:56:43.430-05:002014-02-28T09:56:43.430-05:00I am in love with this poem.I am in love with this poem.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64609707665047365002014-02-28T01:58:06.004-05:002014-02-28T01:58:06.004-05:00Excellent look out and looking in, an entire ocean...Excellent look out and looking in, an entire ocean teaming with men and industry or<br />you here and now, we two. No imports. Rocking Rhythm. A sweet lullaby.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63734800678447716122014-02-27T23:11:57.401-05:002014-02-27T23:11:57.401-05:00You absolutely HAD me at those first two lines. Fa...You absolutely HAD me at those first two lines. Fantastic. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20040064726908339962014-02-27T12:34:24.720-05:002014-02-27T12:34:24.720-05:00Tip of the finger
Tip of the tongue
The faint prel...Tip of the finger<br />Tip of the tongue<br />The faint prelude to deluge is exciting indeed.<br />You spin desire so ageless and beautifully Shay.G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69828014700589359852014-02-27T11:54:05.844-05:002014-02-27T11:54:05.844-05:00Gorgeous. I love that picture, too.Gorgeous. I love that picture, too.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2306780199963552442014-02-27T11:09:51.779-05:002014-02-27T11:09:51.779-05:00Dear Shay ... Stanza three ~~ each word a treasure...Dear Shay ... Stanza three ~~ each word a treasure! Lovely poem.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71228054143038414092014-02-27T09:38:45.901-05:002014-02-27T09:38:45.901-05:00That picture is beautiful and so perfect for your ...That picture is beautiful and so perfect for your romantic poem. That woman was clearly distracted by nothing and needed to be brought back down to earth.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7036116225289901692014-02-26T22:23:40.245-05:002014-02-26T22:23:40.245-05:00I think you have to get to a certain age before yo...I think you have to get to a certain age before you know what really matters. (I've been at that juncture for at least a decade.)<br /><br />Hot and sweet at the same time.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86589793274436833002014-02-26T21:31:30.647-05:002014-02-26T21:31:30.647-05:00Wow...a great poem *and* I learned what a Selkie i...Wow...a great poem *and* I learned what a Selkie is. Nice! :-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50855586327161642622014-02-26T21:28:43.558-05:002014-02-26T21:28:43.558-05:00Loved this . . . the who knows what to who knows w...Loved this . . . the who knows what to who knows where and who the hell cares to the provocative last stanza. :0)Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53244991224572726072014-02-26T21:05:04.222-05:002014-02-26T21:05:04.222-05:00"a little bit of wet ... a tide the rides fro..."a little bit of wet ... a tide the rides from me to you."<br /><br />from the the smallest detail to the overwhelming rush. Pretty much covers itAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27166246105825770882014-02-26T18:36:34.263-05:002014-02-26T18:36:34.263-05:00I like the choosing of the small bit of wetness ov...I like the choosing of the small bit of wetness over the whole of the ocean....and then the reference to the "tide that rides from me to you to me again."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38591073522963425832014-02-26T17:29:31.220-05:002014-02-26T17:29:31.220-05:00Very lulling in rhythm, and there's a simplici...Very lulling in rhythm, and there's a simplicity to the desires here that make them wise. I especially like the line about every fox going grey, and about giving grace away or losing it anyway. A lovely bit of light on the water, reflecting, Shay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-410622100737737312014-02-26T16:24:16.745-05:002014-02-26T16:24:16.745-05:00SO excellently do you describe me current wisdom s...SO excellently do you describe me current wisdom state of mind, dear friendPoet!!!!<br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> =^..^= <3<br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62556425707661616012014-02-26T15:58:30.337-05:002014-02-26T15:58:30.337-05:00Very provocative. A bit of perfection from a nice ...Very provocative. A bit of perfection from a nice bit of inspiration.cosmos camihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09558327124451076957noreply@blogger.com