tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6778679975681764753..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): TightropeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83453344814567783962010-07-14T10:05:04.814-04:002010-07-14T10:05:04.814-04:00The last verse? Incredible!
Love it. Just love ...The last verse? <i>Incredible</i>!<br /><br />Love it. Just love it. "Not more than you, but more than waiting." <br /><br />Perfect.Mojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03498213932233245032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17126188945048635952010-07-13T00:42:05.032-04:002010-07-13T00:42:05.032-04:00you are for effortlessly realyou are for effortlessly realCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91400120135629328792010-07-11T21:42:22.882-04:002010-07-11T21:42:22.882-04:00I love the last verse because it shows awareness a...I love the last verse because it shows awareness and self love...and that you're not going to continue to put up with any of her bullshit!Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72076129231340899982010-07-11T17:41:57.207-04:002010-07-11T17:41:57.207-04:00The last two lines are so much more than a warning...The last two lines are so much more than a warning...more than a threat...more a statement of fact. Even the most patient become less so in time.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27807356860518621662010-07-11T17:33:59.443-04:002010-07-11T17:33:59.443-04:00This is a wonderful piece Fireblossom, your poetry...This is a wonderful piece Fireblossom, your poetry is very insightful to human nature - real and honest..devotation has a way of being forgetful after time...and if one waits to long even family can forget one was born...living and loving goes in two directions...you captured it well here.....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23652636316113132422010-07-11T16:58:24.454-04:002010-07-11T16:58:24.454-04:00Very nicely done.Very nicely done.The Grandpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08548802274156524456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32495570096274657102010-07-11T16:02:19.221-04:002010-07-11T16:02:19.221-04:00Stay away just one day too long. That is a very te...Stay away just one day too long. That is a very telling line.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25517434427252224822010-07-11T14:44:58.238-04:002010-07-11T14:44:58.238-04:00Nicely done. The nails/mood bit especially.Nicely done. The nails/mood bit especially.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8286618236900783132010-07-11T13:43:52.747-04:002010-07-11T13:43:52.747-04:00Like MZ above me, I love the first three lines.
T...Like MZ above me, I love the first three lines.<br /><br />That ought to take me to 90 anyway ;-)machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39206562886163047372010-07-11T10:06:25.945-04:002010-07-11T10:06:25.945-04:00Oh, I love those first three lines!Oh, I love those first three lines!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26890010439546348302010-07-11T09:16:14.918-04:002010-07-11T09:16:14.918-04:00ooo, yes, more than waiting.ooo, yes, more than waiting.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.com