tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post683210957644953887..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): NiceFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44930670618153732952012-02-26T16:37:15.793-05:002012-02-26T16:37:15.793-05:00only self-absorbed assholes think that someone wil...only self-absorbed assholes think that someone will not only forgive them, but forget... and why should we?<br /><br />this is righteous, dude!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60218682978233150122012-02-22T04:46:38.519-05:002012-02-22T04:46:38.519-05:00Yay for Firefox ... Betcha these sentiments were a...Yay for Firefox ... Betcha these sentiments were at full boil while the mouth opened and said, simply, "keep coming back ..." These unmailed letters marked "For landfill only" show that just because we behave decent so we don't get cut off from life support (the meetings) doesn't mean the raging heart doesn't have A LOT to say ... The Word Garden is a sort of landfill, wouldn't you say, or the garden that grew over it? - BAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6562051032696266672012-02-21T11:49:07.839-05:002012-02-21T11:49:07.839-05:00Ahhh, there's the fire Miss Blossom.Ahhh, there's the fire Miss Blossom.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26703344037241025552012-02-21T09:18:54.886-05:002012-02-21T09:18:54.886-05:00do you watch Revenge?do you watch Revenge?Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79595950859069159842012-02-21T00:49:03.261-05:002012-02-21T00:49:03.261-05:00Actually, it is an adorable rant... As long as one...Actually, it is an adorable rant... As long as one isn't on the recieving end of this. I can just see her best friend raising a glass and saying "here, here".Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83011209314264607252012-02-20T22:48:38.182-05:002012-02-20T22:48:38.182-05:00Spit out like snake venom, blinding and ultimately...Spit out like snake venom, blinding and ultimately deadly.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13557660550684694832012-02-20T21:19:06.349-05:002012-02-20T21:19:06.349-05:00Oh, yeah, Shay, I agree with G-Man—I hope I never ...Oh, yeah, Shay, I agree with G-Man—I hope I never piss you off.<br />Luv, KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55301280590869638152012-02-20T21:14:54.052-05:002012-02-20T21:14:54.052-05:00Really, I wish you'd stop beating around the b...Really, I wish you'd stop beating around the bush and tell us how you really feel ;-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84904867621366492542012-02-20T19:39:46.757-05:002012-02-20T19:39:46.757-05:00I generally look askance at angry breakup poems, b...I generally look askance at angry breakup poems, but this is so clean and tight that it's hard to dislike it. This piece knows when to say enough is enough on many levels; it's very solid work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-92101424878453700612012-02-20T19:26:06.220-05:002012-02-20T19:26:06.220-05:00Dearest Shay...
Remind me to stay on your good sid...Dearest Shay...<br />Remind me to stay on your good side.<br />Thank You...GG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37100371998208866562012-02-20T17:15:20.150-05:002012-02-20T17:15:20.150-05:00God, I love this! -especially the end.God, I love this! -especially the end.Cathy Feasterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302068829418562420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34670956910343585912012-02-20T16:50:16.327-05:002012-02-20T16:50:16.327-05:00Now, that is a rant!Now, that is a rant!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30153327501956108432012-02-20T15:59:47.176-05:002012-02-20T15:59:47.176-05:00Woooohooooo....those last lines are like razorblad...Woooohooooo....those last lines are like razorblade frosting on a cake made from rusty nails. I still feel the sting....ohhhh yeahhh!!!Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88332579850025521752012-02-20T15:30:01.516-05:002012-02-20T15:30:01.516-05:00I now know what I want to have tattooed onto my bo...I now know what I want to have tattooed onto my body. But I need a big part, because that's a lot of lines. Perhaps I need to choose a part that keeps getting bigger?<br /><br />Wow!<br /><br />When I saw the title, I thought of the Dixie Chicks' song "I'm Not Ready to Make Nice." Yours has even more bite...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60053078738430177732012-02-20T15:14:05.046-05:002012-02-20T15:14:05.046-05:00i get the feeling you are a bit pissed off at some...i get the feeling you are a bit pissed off at someone<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/02/19/private-dreamliner/%22" rel="nofollow">private dreamliner</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13411403532285211182012-02-20T14:49:20.567-05:002012-02-20T14:49:20.567-05:00Well now -- I am guessing he got the message.Well now -- I am guessing he got the message.Mark Windhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662876682127886074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22511745059686211852012-02-20T14:27:57.419-05:002012-02-20T14:27:57.419-05:00I know several people I feel this way about!I know several people I feel this way about!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90889124280576793172012-02-20T13:51:05.217-05:002012-02-20T13:51:05.217-05:00It felt as if a machine-gun just exhausted the who...It felt as if a machine-gun just exhausted the whole magazine at one go! great conclusion.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19344138065486982682012-02-20T13:13:49.405-05:002012-02-20T13:13:49.405-05:00Do you feel better now?Do you feel better now?Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22414607222060651132012-02-20T12:47:57.747-05:002012-02-20T12:47:57.747-05:00I feel anger and resentment trickle through your w...I feel anger and resentment trickle through your words and I love the ending.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2281499035506602402012-02-20T12:32:59.178-05:002012-02-20T12:32:59.178-05:00YES! DO make this into a poster! Last two lines ar...YES! DO make this into a poster! Last two lines are fantastic!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63169247568889553152012-02-20T10:53:49.629-05:002012-02-20T10:53:49.629-05:00Wow! I would not want to be on your bad side. Love...Wow! I would not want to be on your bad side. Love Those final lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90533274489847541862012-02-20T10:41:14.239-05:002012-02-20T10:41:14.239-05:00WOW... strong words ... powerful poem. I have a fr...WOW... strong words ... powerful poem. I have a friend who writes a lot of angry poetry - she should love this!<br /><br />"Love was the drug,<br />But hate is the high."<br /><br />What an ending!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81508067034478313202012-02-20T10:32:37.560-05:002012-02-20T10:32:37.560-05:00Nice like a stick in the eye -- I like how that 3r...Nice like a stick in the eye -- I like how that 3rd stanza sandwiches in some childish pissiness.Kathy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09475101089455608729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46522703825949069032012-02-20T10:25:18.264-05:002012-02-20T10:25:18.264-05:00Bring the 'tude and let it rock--I'm all f...Bring the 'tude and let it rock--I'm all for people hearing the truth, especially the sanctimonious, usually the first to preach and the last to listen. Last lines are indeed sharp, but I also like the second stanza for its uncompromising honesty and up front analogy.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com