tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6961789335461650357..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Athena, SWFFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70679168428170207742013-09-27T04:46:59.966-04:002013-09-27T04:46:59.966-04:00I don't want to leave this one. Will read it a...I don't want to leave this one. Will read it again before I go. How absolutely beautiful it is. <br />Love this: "When you kiss me, if you kiss me"<br />You are a wonder.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14025096903959519712013-09-26T13:20:31.453-04:002013-09-26T13:20:31.453-04:00read that several times, each time i felt that tug...read that several times, each time i felt that tug ... and i love that 'photo'Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54931616371394860832013-09-26T11:45:11.041-04:002013-09-26T11:45:11.041-04:00Got pulled in by the photo. Deep and to the point....Got pulled in by the photo. Deep and to the point. Inner power, great phrasing, as always.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81924926327656127662013-09-25T20:44:36.705-04:002013-09-25T20:44:36.705-04:00Shay, I love it, it's so strong... and the pho...Shay, I love it, it's so strong... and the photo is perfect...Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3642199928014719292013-09-25T14:27:12.578-04:002013-09-25T14:27:12.578-04:00I like the picture of the owl and the idea of owl ...I like the picture of the owl and the idea of owl being on the shoulder. <br /><br />The question is does the owl hold hostage or does it protect? <br /><br />BTW I like owls and they have a bad rep, which is unfair.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10571057286605762342013-09-25T14:11:36.863-04:002013-09-25T14:11:36.863-04:00I love the last stanza.I love the last stanza.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29813271892083201072013-09-25T10:59:15.724-04:002013-09-25T10:59:15.724-04:00Carrying marks on your body and an owl on your sho...Carrying marks on your body and an owl on your shoulder brings me back to the women healers of earlier days with their animal guides. You're in a long line of wise women.<br /><br />Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57632367749953568852013-09-25T01:54:33.905-04:002013-09-25T01:54:33.905-04:00you're a witch, right? because this opened exa...you're a witch, right? because this opened exactly the cold window to Athena, and I got shiversAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66686057361098277742013-09-25T00:57:08.589-04:002013-09-25T00:57:08.589-04:00**I have marks on my body
from lessons sharp and b...**I have marks on my body<br />from lessons sharp and black.**<br /><br />LOVE)))!!! Xxmyinnerchick.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07523772091083412278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58558238490062260892013-09-24T21:59:48.785-04:002013-09-24T21:59:48.785-04:00I love the rhyme scheme of this. No prompt? How ...I love the rhyme scheme of this. No prompt? How exactly does that work?Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9771507849289426722013-09-24T21:33:56.925-04:002013-09-24T21:33:56.925-04:00So, is this a physical owl, or an internal protect...So, is this a physical owl, or an internal protective mechanism? This poem leaves me wondering. Nicely done!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60054449479991011982013-09-24T19:10:37.917-04:002013-09-24T19:10:37.917-04:00... very intriguing. Can't decide if the owl...... very intriguing. Can't decide if the owl is a comfort or a warning... I suppose it could be both. Nice.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68671250157841492192013-09-24T18:18:55.981-04:002013-09-24T18:18:55.981-04:00Oh, I love this one! I read it out loud because th...Oh, I love this one! I read it out loud because the line rhythms are so nice.<br /><br />Pat<br />Critter AlleyPat Wahlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01138619912065680084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52838847715801204582013-09-24T12:36:00.676-04:002013-09-24T12:36:00.676-04:00OMG, those first lines! Brilliant! Love the owl on...OMG, those first lines! Brilliant! Love the owl on her shoulder, and the moon at her back. Sigh. Powerful write, kiddo.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55122066805978485372013-09-24T10:49:45.604-04:002013-09-24T10:49:45.604-04:00Love the final stanza. Who, indeed, is the owl cal...Love the final stanza. Who, indeed, is the owl calling...hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39384594884436107672013-09-24T10:48:05.367-04:002013-09-24T10:48:05.367-04:00Just gorgeous, Shay. I love all the little touches...Just gorgeous, Shay. I love all the little touches that suggest one who loves the night, the cold, a goddess both tempting and terrifying.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43909239547821877412013-09-24T10:29:42.670-04:002013-09-24T10:29:42.670-04:00nice, shay.nice, shay.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56325221686380800552013-09-24T09:30:45.367-04:002013-09-24T09:30:45.367-04:00Your words are so deeply powerful. Your words are so deeply powerful. Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.com