tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7150614317761769440..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Mulier Loquitur MortuisFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57405547790494737972014-11-06T00:16:34.456-05:002014-11-06T00:16:34.456-05:00Like someone the world discarded speaking out from...Like someone the world discarded speaking out from a once-overgrown grave, now bared to the world. Beautiful.Sweeper of Dreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00078459443293328745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8327466942081333472014-11-05T03:25:44.702-05:002014-11-05T03:25:44.702-05:00was the "ostler" verse a reference to ho...was the "ostler" verse a reference to horse shit? (yes, i had to google ostler so i'm damn well gonna mention it in my comment, even if it doesn't make any sense.)<br /><br />i'm gonna go to Coal's to catch up, but then i'm going to tear up every piece of paper in my house; throw away every pen and pencil; unplug my laptop and remove its battery (it cost too much to destroy it) and then delete my blog.<br /><br />oh, wait... i guess i need to delete my blog before i unplug my laptop. i'll figure it out.<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13629303520695044479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74505476323967566382014-10-29T15:14:19.871-04:002014-10-29T15:14:19.871-04:00I loved "You look gray,
as if all your blood ...I loved "You look gray,<br />as if all your blood had turned to smoke." LOL That's a good line.<br /><br />Not that you won't have an even better one, but this poem is spooky enough for me to wish you a very hauntingly happy Halloween.<br /><br />p.s. And Skittles too:~)Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74539330963901134292014-10-29T06:06:31.770-04:002014-10-29T06:06:31.770-04:00Very cool, FB!Very cool, FB!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80140660521809030202014-10-27T21:41:34.995-04:002014-10-27T21:41:34.995-04:00You look grey ?
You need a glasses...tee..heh..I
J...You look grey ?<br />You need a glasses...tee..heh..I<br />Just be silly<br />;)<br />xoxMr Puddyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09024839895877150953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18663529191349825082014-10-25T20:45:56.797-04:002014-10-25T20:45:56.797-04:00I want to claim that second stanza as mine. Outst...I want to claim that second stanza as mine. Outstanding.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65794160028259088842014-10-25T12:15:45.509-04:002014-10-25T12:15:45.509-04:00From the other side, you get to finally say what y...From the other side, you get to finally say what you want. That lovely photo and quote gone awry. Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1112099368977629722014-10-25T09:39:51.923-04:002014-10-25T09:39:51.923-04:00OwWOOOOO! Together with the Sinead O, this is an...OwWOOOOO! Together with the Sinead O, this is an unforgettable experience. The victim returns forever, I am certain of it, and your lines make me feel that I hear Esther herself speak from beyond the grave while watching the Reverend dear "...invoking your cotton-eared god." Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-831444884253199062014-10-24T20:54:18.638-04:002014-10-24T20:54:18.638-04:00so much to find in the crackling flames of your cr...so much to find in the crackling flames of your creativity<br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> =^..^= Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54748550358074134472014-10-24T20:42:32.700-04:002014-10-24T20:42:32.700-04:00"you look grey / as if all your blood had tur..."you look grey / as if all your blood had turned to smoke"<br /><br />damn, what a great line. this one feels like it was written by someone on the other side. thanks for adding your voice, Shay ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48505080812045488702014-10-24T19:34:14.378-04:002014-10-24T19:34:14.378-04:00This makes me feel as if someone dead were indeed ...This makes me feel as if someone dead were indeed talking(as per your title) in that disjointed way, separate and disparate images, memories rather surreal and distorted, non-sequitur statements and little not-so-nonsensical rhymes. Truly spooky, and truly well-written, Shay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30165102050657683242014-10-24T17:34:32.353-04:002014-10-24T17:34:32.353-04:00I LOVE "like ice jammed into an envelope"...I LOVE "like ice jammed into an envelope" and the discomfort of acknowledging "the slaughter that precedes your roast of beef on its platter". (good one.) The rhythm of this piece lends itself well to the tale.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63732007606108795382014-10-24T16:29:04.061-04:002014-10-24T16:29:04.061-04:00I really enjoyed this poem, Shay. There's a ki...I really enjoyed this poem, Shay. There's a kind of galloping rhythm to your chorus verses and your characters are clearly depicted.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com