tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7381593239161492713..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): CBUFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54134580640251938082015-07-26T20:45:48.824-04:002015-07-26T20:45:48.824-04:00Not simplistic....full of woof and warpNot simplistic....full of woof and warpCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33536372598236927432015-07-25T15:12:20.208-04:002015-07-25T15:12:20.208-04:00I'm sitting where it's hot, and this gave ...I'm sitting where it's hot, and this gave me chills, Shay. Thanks for playing ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23057936893712313552015-07-24T23:12:55.358-04:002015-07-24T23:12:55.358-04:00Maude sounds like my kind of gal!Maude sounds like my kind of gal!Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54895120868095566492015-07-24T20:23:32.073-04:002015-07-24T20:23:32.073-04:00Clever and I wanted more~ Poor Maude-she sounds li...Clever and I wanted more~ Poor Maude-she sounds like quite a broad.Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53658663777763180122015-07-24T16:57:43.681-04:002015-07-24T16:57:43.681-04:00You can't forget the little details in any thi...You can't forget the little details in any thing, I guess! k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77766628459251769892015-07-24T10:52:42.987-04:002015-07-24T10:52:42.987-04:00Oh! My! God! I LOVE this so much. (Have you been s...Oh! My! God! I LOVE this so much. (Have you been spying on me? LOL.) I especially love "Dear Teddy, I finally understand". Cackling. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62089274797090659312015-07-24T10:29:03.508-04:002015-07-24T10:29:03.508-04:00As Kerry says, a unique and very personal metaphor...As Kerry says, a unique and very personal metaphor here that you work with great skill. The final feeling, there at that last line, is how we are failed by every system, and how somehow, we must understand (or produce) our own explosions of protest to maybe blast our way out. Hope must always be sent postage due, you make me feel.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28801354834164267642015-07-24T09:15:55.788-04:002015-07-24T09:15:55.788-04:00I love your concept of mailing one's hopes whe...I love your concept of mailing one's hopes when young and having them returned unopened in old age. Such a great metaphor.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42941154905060432572015-07-24T08:31:12.301-04:002015-07-24T08:31:12.301-04:00"--an old fashioned paper letter-- / to the U..."--an old fashioned paper letter-- / to the Unabomber in prison." will definitely be loved by Teddy, who was so against modern technology... Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25844694880276210782015-07-23T23:59:06.170-04:002015-07-23T23:59:06.170-04:00That feeling that leads a lady to write to the una...That feeling that leads a lady to write to the unabomber and be the first one to the mailbox? I know it, but I've never heard it expressed in such a unique and utterly perfect way.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2832897968633952712015-07-23T22:49:55.335-04:002015-07-23T22:49:55.335-04:00There's a whole backstory here that would be f...There's a whole backstory here that would be fun to hear too, I bet ;-)C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56602467133452529622015-07-23T20:23:20.649-04:002015-07-23T20:23:20.649-04:00quite a twist! captivating from start to finish, l...quite a twist! captivating from start to finish, lovely little narrative.Sweeper of Dreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00078459443293328745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61075185328747677072015-07-23T20:00:47.816-04:002015-07-23T20:00:47.816-04:00oh, maude's got her secrets!oh, maude's got her secrets!TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com