tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7542161045299721021..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): VântuluiFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43555720824282155032020-06-28T11:36:34.103-04:002020-06-28T11:36:34.103-04:00So beautiful. Bosco, looking at you with love, as ...So beautiful. Bosco, looking at you with love, as he still does from the spirit world where all good bois go........so glad you came through whatever this was and are still gifting us with your poems.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87919180715286302072020-06-27T12:24:19.885-04:002020-06-27T12:24:19.885-04:00Ahhhh. Shay, thank you for sharing this with me. I...Ahhhh. Shay, thank you for sharing this with me. It's heartbreaking and beautiful.I am so happy you had a positive outcome. Linda Lee Lyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669367010600000396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53510050239283153132018-02-25T09:18:15.041-05:002018-02-25T09:18:15.041-05:00There is a burning that wasn't there before,
a...There is a burning that wasn't there before,<br />and so if you find me here in tears and ask me why,<br /><br />I can only say how I'll miss it all,<br />how I wasn't ready,<br />but nonetheless<br />I can feel it coming...<br /><br />I have found and lost a whole lot more since I first read this poem, so these lines mean more than ever.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52738131054996416632018-02-24T21:50:47.271-05:002018-02-24T21:50:47.271-05:00How i love this one, for all the same reasons i li...How i love this one, for all the same reasons i listed in my comment back then. Plus now dear Bosco has passed on. Oy vey.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-92042203215136496042011-11-29T02:49:39.447-05:002011-11-29T02:49:39.447-05:00you took my breath away with this one, Shay! one o...you took my breath away with this one, Shay! one of my all-time favorites though it makes me want to cry ~ i'm not ready at all.<br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57798012061551080112011-11-26T13:52:03.945-05:002011-11-26T13:52:03.945-05:00There is something so sad and yet excepting here. ...There is something so sad and yet excepting here. Walking in to death or accepting the death of something. This one sneaks up on you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54899597697743471462011-11-26T09:54:39.118-05:002011-11-26T09:54:39.118-05:00"without affect"
That is sooo good! Pe..."without affect"<br /><br />That is sooo good! Perfect, out-of-the-ordinary word choice. You consistently amaze me.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5521015612643132462011-11-25T20:31:14.698-05:002011-11-25T20:31:14.698-05:00there is a music. . .
relentlessly . . .
Aloh...there is a music. . . <br />relentlessly . . . <br /><br /><br /><br />Aloha from Honolulu<br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br /> > < } } ( ° ><br /> <br /> ><}}(°><br /><br />< ° ) } } > <Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37305959818267936602011-11-25T09:17:47.743-05:002011-11-25T09:17:47.743-05:00That is lovely, Shay.That is lovely, Shay.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81397178089580822812011-11-25T09:16:40.514-05:002011-11-25T09:16:40.514-05:00Nothing lasts, it's true, except the things we...Nothing lasts, it's true, except the things we can't be. Glorious poetry here though, that ought to last forever. Last line of the second stanza, in particular.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65906978342355615512011-11-25T08:53:15.264-05:002011-11-25T08:53:15.264-05:00Oh Shay...wonderful, just wonderful. xOh Shay...wonderful, just wonderful. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55731468416001559562011-11-25T08:07:05.015-05:002011-11-25T08:07:05.015-05:00Your creation here captures the essence of what so...Your creation here captures the essence of what so many souls have wished and wish to say when their moment of transition is near. <br /><br />...dancing until out of breath<br />...stars unburned<br />...heightened keened senses<br />...age portrayed with baron trees<br />and unconditional love and loved<br />...never previously heard music plays on...<br /><br />Wonderful painting. Can I buy a silk screen copy?<br /><br />LoveMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36251427703981441482011-11-25T03:41:46.562-05:002011-11-25T03:41:46.562-05:00There are stars unburned
in a blank black sky--
T...There are stars unburned<br />in a blank black sky--<br /><br />The musicality in this is delicious...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78139187464312638752011-11-25T01:22:04.011-05:002011-11-25T01:22:04.011-05:00Oh boy, this one did me in. Bosco, blind but looki...Oh boy, this one did me in. Bosco, blind but looking at you with love, the whole nostalgia for life we feel as the years ahead grow fewer........though you have way more than me left.........I, too, loved the bread and jam , and am right there with you in how they have never tasted sweeter..........beautiful, poignant, happy/sad, nostalgic and written with the pen of an angel.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2991235012643092172011-11-25T00:20:28.444-05:002011-11-25T00:20:28.444-05:00I like the way you have woven details into these l...I like the way you have woven details into these lines: the bread and berry jam, the bare trees unable to hold the wind, the blind dog. There is something deeply tragic in the commonality of the experience expressed here - betrayal, or terminal disease, or loss of a loved one.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13303750856836012472011-11-24T22:53:14.789-05:002011-11-24T22:53:14.789-05:00Such power hereSuch power hereNoelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17770013944671340961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82552285797160526492011-11-24T22:14:32.700-05:002011-11-24T22:14:32.700-05:00mmm...very nice write..the opening stanza is damn ...mmm...very nice write..the opening stanza is damn near perfect and it just gets better...great descriptors shay...i will miss it too.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90472750075175908142011-11-24T22:09:30.282-05:002011-11-24T22:09:30.282-05:00I think this is one of my favorites...I love how y...I think this is one of my favorites...I love how your blind dog looks back at you with love. I imagine the words of this poem spoken so softly, but at the same time overflowing with emotion. it felt a bit like my heart was bleeding as I was reading it (3 times) :)Cathy Feasterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302068829418562420noreply@blogger.com