tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7823544556937029021..comments2024-03-28T17:44:41.989-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Jocelyn's HouseFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25493252630221214032011-08-01T21:59:55.275-04:002011-08-01T21:59:55.275-04:00your poetry is always amazing, Shay, but the words...your poetry is always amazing, Shay, but the words in this poem are raw and red with the blood of a broken heart. painfully brilliant!<br />dani ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46015675812569730632010-09-01T21:20:19.536-04:002010-09-01T21:20:19.536-04:00Absolutely awesome. I love the venom, the powerful...Absolutely awesome. I love the venom, the powerful imagery, the little tinge of regret and sadness. Extremely good writing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29517005452386311872010-09-01T11:59:30.903-04:002010-09-01T11:59:30.903-04:00All I can say at this point is .....
Oooooooooooo ...All I can say at this point is .....<br />Oooooooooooo ~ wonderful writing!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13806648015479072272010-08-31T11:48:17.770-04:002010-08-31T11:48:17.770-04:00this was fantastic from beginning to end. Capture...this was fantastic from beginning to end. Captured me...I loved the emotions that your words stirred...Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18220109351378352592010-08-30T17:56:24.189-04:002010-08-30T17:56:24.189-04:00The words just tumbled
Nice phrases hereThe words just tumbled<br />Nice phrases hereSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79072669686175497262010-08-30T16:49:56.404-04:002010-08-30T16:49:56.404-04:00I really like the style here. Draws the reader rig...I really like the style here. Draws the reader right in.cosmos camihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09558327124451076957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26135834409892861892010-08-30T02:54:27.729-04:002010-08-30T02:54:27.729-04:00Very powerful. and full of truth,pain,anguish.. Wo...Very powerful. and full of truth,pain,anguish.. Wonderful piece... Loved the endingAbhilasha-The Desirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13034585231754575359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71043082244770830032010-08-29T18:43:37.002-04:002010-08-29T18:43:37.002-04:00wow is this to be continued? I would love to keep...wow is this to be continued? I would love to keep reading this, maybe part 2??Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16418086693367974152010-08-28T14:21:49.480-04:002010-08-28T14:21:49.480-04:00loved the raw anger behind this...the type of basi...loved the raw anger behind this...the type of basic emotion that always makes good reading...<br /><br />here's my <a href="http://rebeccarites.blogspot.com/2010/08/last-goodbye.html" rel="nofollow">magpie</a>rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51632480667523813192010-08-28T14:04:07.465-04:002010-08-28T14:04:07.465-04:00thats one powerful peice of poetry with one heck o...thats one powerful peice of poetry with one heck of a bitch written in! great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66552723642485707842010-08-28T10:38:28.761-04:002010-08-28T10:38:28.761-04:00ouch! Powerful. Bravo!ouch! Powerful. Bravo!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85559661669079783742010-08-28T00:54:12.126-04:002010-08-28T00:54:12.126-04:00Very powerful, well written I loved it. Well done....Very powerful, well written I loved it. Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12489264697266150220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14660558557477151752010-08-27T21:58:49.853-04:002010-08-27T21:58:49.853-04:00This is so raw and honest that I am at a loss for ...This is so raw and honest that I am at a loss for other words. I am just taking it all in...<br /><br />Strikes me as interesting that we both keyed in on the idea of possible poison in the birdfeeder. If that means that my mind in any sort of way works like yours then I am honored!Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8917446828422366052010-08-27T12:42:26.055-04:002010-08-27T12:42:26.055-04:00If this wasn't so beautifully, perfectly writt...If this wasn't so beautifully, perfectly written, I would just say what Riot Kitty said and offer to bring the Crisco.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31292457572332494972010-08-27T11:20:58.047-04:002010-08-27T11:20:58.047-04:00This is one my faves of yours. The voice is so viv...This is one my faves of yours. The voice is so vivid, I can really hear it. And I love how it tells a story. I feel like I want to know more. *sigh* guess that's why I don't read much poetry. I always want more!Dayana Stockdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03732725838165251900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60745954665894179562010-08-27T07:38:12.155-04:002010-08-27T07:38:12.155-04:00Had to read this one twice. And I suspect I'l...Had to read this one twice. And I suspect I'll read it again. And again.<br /><br /><i>"Looking out of Jocelyn's windows that night, did it never sink in for you that the scene is the same through any shape of glass,<br /><br />Or that when darkness devours the world, it may as well be gone,<br /><br />And all you will see,<br /><br />No matter how hard you stare out,<br /><br />Is yourself?</i>"<br /><br />That gave me chills girl! And I know any number of people who could be the She Who Shall Not Be Named in this one.<br /><br />Possibly some of your best work ever, Shay.<br /><br />*applause*Mojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03498213932233245032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41515308183682439032010-08-26T20:13:25.831-04:002010-08-26T20:13:25.831-04:00What a horrible wicked woman--so much pain and sad...What a horrible wicked woman--so much pain and sadness.<br /><br />TeresaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14603454477759601752010-08-26T15:51:15.089-04:002010-08-26T15:51:15.089-04:00There are too many fine lines to re-play here. A t...There are too many fine lines to re-play here. A truly wonderful piece of broken-ness.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58501094434003147832010-08-26T14:55:07.644-04:002010-08-26T14:55:07.644-04:00Powerful stuff. I like it.Powerful stuff. I like it.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70264280027083789122010-08-26T14:20:31.760-04:002010-08-26T14:20:31.760-04:00Wow! Powerful writing.Wow! Powerful writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70203029463308657412010-08-26T12:27:26.176-04:002010-08-26T12:27:26.176-04:00Wow - that last line got me. Wow.Wow - that last line got me. Wow.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22411667823565204022010-08-26T11:49:57.043-04:002010-08-26T11:49:57.043-04:00Ahh, no matter how it looks from the outside, we c...Ahh, no matter how it looks from the outside, we can never know what it is like inside, unless we live there. Wonderful piece, full of vivid imagery and a roller coast ride of emotions,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42288981640836330772010-08-26T11:33:36.320-04:002010-08-26T11:33:36.320-04:00Is this house week???
Even the birds are catching...Is this house week???<br /><br />Even the birds are catching it in this one.<br /><br />Nice Shay<br /><br />moonie smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57848956678402202902010-08-26T11:32:12.264-04:002010-08-26T11:32:12.264-04:00dang shay...out of the park...or at least out of t...dang shay...out of the park...or at least out of the house...that sly cat...but as beautiful as the house is she found a way to paint it in shadow...tight piece.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44201278261841599402010-08-26T11:24:34.097-04:002010-08-26T11:24:34.097-04:00That's better!
I love a bit of wickedness and ...That's better!<br />I love a bit of wickedness and spite. Saccharine doesn't do it for me.<br />I'll have to keep an eye out for you.Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.com