tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7839938956969702623..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): ReportFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66879403646980360202012-05-22T11:54:09.531-04:002012-05-22T11:54:09.531-04:00laugh or cry? hmmmmmmmm.laugh or cry? hmmmmmmmm.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56638734485159230582012-05-22T10:40:13.253-04:002012-05-22T10:40:13.253-04:00Wow this blew me away, I'm not sure whether I ...Wow this blew me away, I'm not sure whether I should laugh or cry at this, amazingChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3282869130738770232012-05-22T09:18:27.893-04:002012-05-22T09:18:27.893-04:00I'm so glad I got the opportunity to read this...I'm so glad I got the opportunity to read this piece. I'm rather ashamed to admit that I have been "Subject" on too many occasions in the past. It just never gets old, this crazy love thing.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85301667245892388532012-05-22T00:54:33.625-04:002012-05-22T00:54:33.625-04:00Sounds about right.
These are the best sections t...Sounds about right.<br /><br />These are the best sections to me:<br /><br />"Subject's pupils dilate, as if to admit as much of the world which contains the Love Object as possible"<br /><br />"patterns bear little difference from those of drug addicts, with the exception of liver damage, which is not present here"<br /><br />"Subject feels singled out by fate." (both times)<br /><br />"Love Object removed from Subject's environment." It can happen just that quickly and simply, can't it.<br /><br />"Summary: Subject does not die. Project concluded." It's so much fun to be under a microscope.<br /><br />Very creative, Shay. Excellent work.<br /><br />rosemarymint.wordpress.com✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82047415875571780942012-05-21T23:31:20.692-04:002012-05-21T23:31:20.692-04:00What an ingenious structure for the exploration of...What an ingenious structure for the exploration of the theme!Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3412327709478258402009-12-30T06:55:58.450-05:002009-12-30T06:55:58.450-05:00Trying to catch up here... love this one!Trying to catch up here... love this one!listen for azurehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04300428777385011211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88740958706477943042009-12-27T12:58:44.859-05:002009-12-27T12:58:44.859-05:00Fabulous post. Only thing missing is large quanti...Fabulous post. Only thing missing is large quantities of chocolate to ease the pain.<br /><br />xoJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35603340644387198772009-12-27T09:35:25.001-05:002009-12-27T09:35:25.001-05:00Brilliant.Brilliant.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86768904250619510402009-12-27T03:57:05.731-05:002009-12-27T03:57:05.731-05:00wow...i didn't realize i have been being watch...wow...i didn't realize i have been being watched...or that anyone even heard me...? :) this is excellent!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14799704912492782772009-12-27T00:32:22.936-05:002009-12-27T00:32:22.936-05:00...and we are BOTH still alive...just cannot spell......and we are BOTH still alive...just cannot spell!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17498524940140288735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79063374965388078842009-12-26T19:36:21.776-05:002009-12-26T19:36:21.776-05:00That made me very uptight, i had to read it a few ...That made me very uptight, i had to read it a few more times to unwind somewhat. That is a masterpiece, and I hope it's fictional... not you in pain.<br /><br />SecretiaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78409592363227691222009-12-26T18:11:14.428-05:002009-12-26T18:11:14.428-05:00The worst part is:
you don't die.
you live t...The worst part is:<br /><br />you don't die.<br /><br />you live to do it again<br /><br />you live to never do it again<br /><br /><i>That</i> is truly the worst partDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19264832852679726522009-12-26T16:45:51.285-05:002009-12-26T16:45:51.285-05:00Yay! About the ending, I mean. For me, it always e...Yay! About the ending, I mean. For me, it always ended up with, "I was interested WHY??"Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62197397543203966362009-12-26T14:22:47.949-05:002009-12-26T14:22:47.949-05:00If the subject was up baking in the middle of the ...If the subject was up baking in the middle of the night this would be my story.<br />Hugs,<br />Simone.The romantic query letter and the happy-ever-afterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13382165250238920938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57927570400971703712009-12-26T13:28:27.509-05:002009-12-26T13:28:27.509-05:00What a fine tale! Subject hopefully learned a grea...What a fine tale! Subject hopefully learned a great deal from the experience. Infatuation is a drug. Love is the antidote.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23749787641794322542009-12-26T12:50:28.501-05:002009-12-26T12:50:28.501-05:00It sure does feel like dying though at the end.It sure does feel like dying though at the end.Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42603349786395433872009-12-26T10:41:15.915-05:002009-12-26T10:41:15.915-05:00Follow-up:
Another subject tries to continue anot...Follow-up:<br /><br />Another subject tries to continue another case study. Reports effects of first study interfere with successive studies.machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14157487691979567242009-12-26T10:01:55.182-05:002009-12-26T10:01:55.182-05:00Seems to have taken as long to get out as it did t...Seems to have taken as long to get out as it did to get in.<br /><br />Clever.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67920357718848457172009-12-26T08:46:46.187-05:002009-12-26T08:46:46.187-05:00Very Clinical, and to the point!
Merry Christmas S...Very Clinical, and to the point!<br />Merry Christmas Shaysie...GG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35663212925462007982009-12-26T08:37:44.760-05:002009-12-26T08:37:44.760-05:00you could give klein a run for her money! ;) brill...you could give klein a run for her money! ;) brilliantly done xKelly https://www.blogger.com/profile/16136234174682473917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51504378796754491252009-12-26T05:10:38.392-05:002009-12-26T05:10:38.392-05:00Well madam yes that's Love...
Step by step.......Well madam yes that's Love...<br />Step by step.... Your creativity is unique dear!<br /><br />Been having problems with f***** computer. Sorry- xoxoxDulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89659242004589465702009-12-26T04:40:46.373-05:002009-12-26T04:40:46.373-05:00oh is THAT how it works *grin*oh is THAT how it works *grin*Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31740555611929035562009-12-26T01:28:45.446-05:002009-12-26T01:28:45.446-05:00Brilliant! Oh, but this brought back memories.
No...Brilliant! Oh, but this brought back memories.<br /><br />Now I'm trying to figure out (I'm not mathematical genius) what day I would be on 29 years into marriage and what that love report would read like :)TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.com