tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8033145621689878807..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): trifleFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90730699240407445422013-11-14T18:22:11.942-05:002013-11-14T18:22:11.942-05:00This poem is "crimsy"--part creepy and p...This poem is "crimsy"--part creepy and part whimsy.<br /><br />And the song you chose to go along with it was perfect. A tad on the "creepy" side as well, if I just close my eyes and listen...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61266478882655120512013-11-13T06:49:25.236-05:002013-11-13T06:49:25.236-05:00Second only to your love poetry is your work on lo...Second only to your love poetry is your work on love's loss. Your imagery comes the closest to describing the gut-wrenching pain of it than most other poets I've read.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30442495200196566452013-11-12T16:54:40.730-05:002013-11-12T16:54:40.730-05:00Yoiks!
"Eventually, the blood will wash out...Yoiks! <br /><br />"Eventually, the blood will wash out<br />and I will stay in my grave like a bookmark."<br /><br />Inspired and wired.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27448230075112503192013-11-12T15:34:24.813-05:002013-11-12T15:34:24.813-05:00Wow, incredible.Wow, incredible.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64011195147883590652013-11-12T14:10:00.650-05:002013-11-12T14:10:00.650-05:00Yes, you are the boss! Unquestioningly. "I wi...Yes, you are the boss! Unquestioningly. "I will stay in my grave like a bookmark." Argh. (Gnashing of teeth-those I have left-rending of garments.)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24484135644747971072013-11-12T13:18:18.761-05:002013-11-12T13:18:18.761-05:00can I just give you a poetry badge that you can fl...can I just give you a poetry badge that you can flash? cuz you're the boss.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5458402459211723622013-11-12T11:00:12.259-05:002013-11-12T11:00:12.259-05:00This is just the coolest concept ever. What Dani ...This is just the coolest concept ever. What Dani said!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46374979766671030162013-11-12T10:35:20.385-05:002013-11-12T10:35:20.385-05:00Loved your poem...
Filled with the longing and emp...Loved your poem...<br />Filled with the longing and emptiness that is Sooo YOU!<br />I remember this song as well.<br />He sounded just like Slim Whitman!<br />You Rock Lady Shay!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61151376121621922972013-11-12T07:15:32.123-05:002013-11-12T07:15:32.123-05:00Two striking, utterly unique images among many- a ...Two striking, utterly unique images among many- a donor poem in a little ice chest and staying in a grave like a bookmark. *Sighs in admiration*Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63698236294033400742013-11-12T02:39:00.157-05:002013-11-12T02:39:00.157-05:00you're just plain wicked...
{why can't yo...you're just plain wicked...<br /><br />{why can't you fucking stop writing and let the rest of us have at least a little self-esteem?}<br /><br />great song choice!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91833598765548144762013-11-11T21:49:48.700-05:002013-11-11T21:49:48.700-05:00you are wicked with the visuals.you are wicked with the visuals.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89568361359890801702013-11-11T21:23:58.058-05:002013-11-11T21:23:58.058-05:00Have I told you recently how much I dig your style...Have I told you recently how much I dig your style? Oddly dark works like this brings a smile to my face. Perhaps it's the closet goth in me that digs such things? Ya see, I was raised by a pack of wild goths. They fed me snake bites, clove cigarettes, and fitted me for my first pair of boots at the age of two. Ahhh, good times. Good times...HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86608053567664593112013-11-11T21:08:53.344-05:002013-11-11T21:08:53.344-05:00There is a dark whimsy to this that really curdles...There is a dark whimsy to this that really curdles my blood at the same time that it charms me. There is a moment like that in everyone's life, perhaps, but how hard most of us would find it to describe it so terrifyingly well. I won't quote, but your last two stanzas in particular are works of dark,delicious art. *begins burning all writing materials*hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com