tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8173567630977207005..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): In The RhambangleFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66852119952595313322016-12-20T01:35:03.712-05:002016-12-20T01:35:03.712-05:00yeah, well, I couldn't figure this prompt out,...yeah, well, I couldn't figure this prompt out, but that's because you're a writer and poet, and I'm a sniklogoilous. grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20929571213399607822016-12-17T14:37:00.550-05:002016-12-17T14:37:00.550-05:00This is so perfect. This truly does amaze me.This is so perfect. This truly does amaze me.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49992496052706716212016-12-17T10:51:20.909-05:002016-12-17T10:51:20.909-05:00The nonsense is so much more sense (or rather sens...The nonsense is so much more sense (or rather sensibility) in how you have created a perfect love poem.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90739671907870433062016-12-17T09:52:08.879-05:002016-12-17T09:52:08.879-05:00This is such a tender expression of love - the mad...This is such a tender expression of love - the made up words become a part of the magic.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64224602727245092102016-12-17T09:35:31.268-05:002016-12-17T09:35:31.268-05:00Thanks ShayThanks ShayCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5692655164455699682016-12-17T09:04:36.331-05:002016-12-17T09:04:36.331-05:00Absolutely enchanting!!❤️Absolutely enchanting!!❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45858600732269243742016-12-17T06:57:49.835-05:002016-12-17T06:57:49.835-05:00Nonsense that isn't nonsense, just like that v...Nonsense that isn't nonsense, just like that viny latticework of dreams under which we lie every night, staring up at the stars of our own cosmic maelstrom. Delightfully light, without sacrificing an inch of depth, and somehow, very eloquent of the way love is--especially those boots, so lost to and so full of the memory of adorable toes.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44647912923770604842016-12-17T03:04:03.601-05:002016-12-17T03:04:03.601-05:00captivating and wonderful. gracias once again for ...captivating and wonderful. gracias once again for sharing your mellifluous word talentMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26829190504450619012016-12-17T02:51:28.752-05:002016-12-17T02:51:28.752-05:00This is beautiful...you take those odd words and m...This is beautiful...you take those odd words and make them feel like they should be part of one's vocabulary.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14865357580130459732016-12-16T23:14:48.203-05:002016-12-16T23:14:48.203-05:00Yeah, I agree. "Shossy" makes it. I love...Yeah, I agree. "Shossy" makes it. I love the last 2 lines.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55269100452627418032016-12-16T23:07:49.207-05:002016-12-16T23:07:49.207-05:00"Shossy" is quite a cool word, and soff ..."Shossy" is quite a cool word, and soff was put in in such a seamless way, I thought it was a real word I'd never heard of...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71008622088921172672016-12-16T20:51:24.102-05:002016-12-16T20:51:24.102-05:00An extremely sophisticated use of the nonsense wor...An extremely sophisticated use of the nonsense words here. I liked your additions as well. The whole piece has a gentleness, a softness, to it that is very touching.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41181750993642324112016-12-16T17:26:40.935-05:002016-12-16T17:26:40.935-05:00Wow, this is really wonderful. You took nonsense w...Wow, this is really wonderful. You took nonsense words and made them sing. I especially love your closing line. Sigh. No one writes love better than you.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com