tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8413953031123337799..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Death and NightFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73887961217605738792016-06-22T21:30:56.917-04:002016-06-22T21:30:56.917-04:00I laughed at loud at the final stanza. The words y...I laughed at loud at the final stanza. The words you weave together are amazing!<br /><br />Pat<br />Critter AlleyPat Wahlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01138619912065680084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10112985258516269492016-06-21T03:32:47.480-04:002016-06-21T03:32:47.480-04:00Brilliant! Made me smile and giggle.
Anna :o]Brilliant! Made me smile and giggle.<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31849203807520284682016-06-20T17:35:49.037-04:002016-06-20T17:35:49.037-04:00Oh, I have two sisters. I was the middle one alway...Oh, I have two sisters. I was the middle one always trying to make peace until I said "fuck it" and let them fight on.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86107147423004199302016-06-19T13:57:56.793-04:002016-06-19T13:57:56.793-04:00Only you could have thought this one up. I am grin...Only you could have thought this one up. I am grinning like a fool. It is too wonderful!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24515340634716490622016-06-19T13:52:31.529-04:002016-06-19T13:52:31.529-04:00Oh, well done! This really made me smile and I lov...Oh, well done! This really made me smile and I loved this: 'Death only got random attention from tubercular poets who thought she was a Goth.' Hilarious . . .<br />jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68783435841685159542016-06-19T09:49:40.820-04:002016-06-19T09:49:40.820-04:00oh well, Death will get her revenge in the end.oh well, Death will get her revenge in the end.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10457556146561578792016-06-19T08:47:14.031-04:002016-06-19T08:47:14.031-04:00Ha. A lot of fun here, smiling. Ha. A lot of fun here, smiling. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26539748363414608742016-06-19T08:22:20.886-04:002016-06-19T08:22:20.886-04:00One thing, if you're Death, you can get away w...One thing, if you're Death, you can get away with chain-smoking.<br /><br />Love it like mad.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50326360237177025322016-06-19T08:18:56.131-04:002016-06-19T08:18:56.131-04:00Only you could write this, Shay. I love how you...Only you could write this, Shay. I love how you've voided every possible cliche, and tuned the poetic sideways, as well as making me so glad I was not drinking coffee as I read. I love this line especially: "...Death only got random attention from tubercular poets who thought she was a Goth..."hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71985917855231750942016-06-18T18:58:14.942-04:002016-06-18T18:58:14.942-04:00You are the most creative person alive, girl! I n...You are the most creative person alive, girl! I needed this so much I didn't even realize that I needed it.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-807874695135082652016-06-18T17:08:07.722-04:002016-06-18T17:08:07.722-04:00Ooh! I love it.
I can read an entire novel based o...Ooh! I love it.<br />I can read an entire novel based on this premise.<br /><br />Creatively done. :-)<br /><br />-HAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9988607489388891992016-06-18T16:14:02.319-04:002016-06-18T16:14:02.319-04:00where jealousy grumbles there certainly no gain; s...where jealousy grumbles there certainly no gain; so much truth in this witty one<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-672524315208877222016-06-18T15:58:09.431-04:002016-06-18T15:58:09.431-04:00you make me laugh. :)you make me laugh. :)TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59652869178103224072016-06-18T15:54:50.475-04:002016-06-18T15:54:50.475-04:00For a moment, this poem felt like, it was describi...For a moment, this poem felt like, it was describing the relationship, I had with my younger brother, growing up. Down right spooky. And yes, he destroyed, what he couldn't take, of mine.Therisa's Worldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14158009488213815860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69372541603732879772016-06-18T15:31:29.127-04:002016-06-18T15:31:29.127-04:00I never had a sister, but I have two daughters... ...I never had a sister, but I have two daughters... this conversation rings all too true. Haha! loved it!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76814054376363728522016-06-18T15:09:59.324-04:002016-06-18T15:09:59.324-04:00Great depiction of that sisterly affection that...Great depiction of that sisterly affection that's not... I have a feeling I will stay away from death as well.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com