tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8546554449542121913..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Lady Franklin BayFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50948549398091030482018-02-25T09:12:38.234-05:002018-02-25T09:12:38.234-05:00I feel like this is a poem I should have read befo...I feel like this is a poem I should have read before today.. and i am so glad to have the opportunity to read it now.. The cold, the sky, the strong woman..Magical.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49759776046846226802018-02-24T21:42:53.032-05:002018-02-24T21:42:53.032-05:00I like the packing of the snow around her heart, a...I like the packing of the snow around her heart, and loving the sky too much. Me, too.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48757060039479528492011-02-08T02:49:32.077-05:002011-02-08T02:49:32.077-05:00i've never heard 'going with the flow'...i've never heard 'going with the flow' so beautifully expressed...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46173334539672587162011-02-07T19:57:29.274-05:002011-02-07T19:57:29.274-05:00cold.. but shiver worthy. Words to string but wint...cold.. but shiver worthy. Words to string but winter's light. Loved it.Tabitha Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08196816108272065974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90197668764060972752011-02-07T18:11:47.650-05:002011-02-07T18:11:47.650-05:00So gorgeous, Shay! Beautiful, lyrical madness!So gorgeous, Shay! Beautiful, lyrical madness!Ami Mattisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91851420105628965922011-02-07T17:58:59.574-05:002011-02-07T17:58:59.574-05:00I don't believe you.
I know your heart will me...I don't believe you.<br />I know your heart will melt the snow. And, it's as big as the sky too :-)machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74604815974596490552011-02-07T16:18:38.561-05:002011-02-07T16:18:38.561-05:00"I wrapped the still, white body of the snow ..."I wrapped the still, white body of the snow around my heart,<br /><br />Not to warm it--<br /><br />But to make it colder yet."<br /><br />-LOVE those lines! I think I have a ring of foolishness myself somewhere...Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18375197407856210512011-02-07T15:55:27.936-05:002011-02-07T15:55:27.936-05:00Beautiful, lyrical, fabulous.... love this:
That...Beautiful, lyrical, fabulous.... love this:<br /><br />That is the ring of foolishness my devotion made.<br /><br />That is my heading, where I am stopped and splintered--<br /><br />An idiot made mad by Heaven's untouchable constancy.Jenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26698365231132834202011-02-07T14:13:05.822-05:002011-02-07T14:13:05.822-05:00so eloquent shay...though i think boys have those ...so eloquent shay...though i think boys have those stories too...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34604524642518151632011-02-07T13:26:22.314-05:002011-02-07T13:26:22.314-05:00yes, this is so beautiful. i love it in it's e...yes, this is so beautiful. i love it in it's entirety, and the first two lines I felt thunk in my chest.<br /><br />perfect!<br /><br />xxLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05321514984426181181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16187777089766540482011-02-07T11:43:19.167-05:002011-02-07T11:43:19.167-05:00absolutely beautiful!absolutely beautiful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68638882764644898122011-02-07T11:37:19.542-05:002011-02-07T11:37:19.542-05:00Excellent. And I like the tag you gave it - travel...Excellent. And I like the tag you gave it - travel stories for girls.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46856647435035976932011-02-07T11:34:49.601-05:002011-02-07T11:34:49.601-05:00Not only is this one of the most beautiful poems I...Not only is this one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, it is one of the most amazing CONCEPTS. How do you do it? You are an amazement! I love wrapping your heart in the snow, loving the sky too much. I love every word of it. Your last line is perfection. Wowzers! This makes my day! Just brilliant.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20239135049666935942011-02-07T11:33:56.030-05:002011-02-07T11:33:56.030-05:00Not to warm it--
But to make it colder yet.
Rea...Not to warm it--<br /><br />But to make it colder yet.<br /><br /><br />Really feel this today ...Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86255032975804653802011-02-07T11:10:54.072-05:002011-02-07T11:10:54.072-05:00"The ring of foolishness my devotion made.&qu..."The ring of foolishness my devotion made."<br /><br />That's gorgeous.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26794772413695063412011-02-07T10:01:25.167-05:002011-02-07T10:01:25.167-05:00"...Not to warm it, but to make it colder yet..."...Not to warm it, but to make it colder yet.." then to fragment and refract the light...blue ice images for the heart of winter.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84167282852238291232011-02-07T09:57:09.252-05:002011-02-07T09:57:09.252-05:00~shiver~~shiver~ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.com