tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8729834737213100893..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): MermaidsFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86578398827847488192008-12-16T21:50:00.000-05:002008-12-16T21:50:00.000-05:00Thank you, everyone who commented! And jannie, my ...Thank you, everyone who commented! <BR/><BR/>And jannie, my humble apologies to the Mist!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78870355549749589522008-12-16T12:48:00.000-05:002008-12-16T12:48:00.000-05:00Glad to see I'm not the onlee one who haunts the f...Glad to see I'm not the onlee one who haunts the fen.<BR/><BR/>And the, the... oh what do you call it, ah yes, the Menger. (I call my hauntings the fen-meng.)<BR/><BR/>And what's so bad about mist to sit beside? The mist doth protest. The mist hath loved many.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68702134001205368102008-12-16T11:41:00.000-05:002008-12-16T11:41:00.000-05:00Hey Shay- This is beautiful. You did a great job w...Hey Shay- This is beautiful. You did a great job with this one. I do not like rhyming poems because sometimes it takes away from the meaning (for me) and I honestly did'nt notice. It appeals to the senses and has nice imageryC. Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11957562888440201122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39781021660045935192008-12-15T12:46:00.000-05:002008-12-15T12:46:00.000-05:00Shay this is just so awesome. Ever image rings in ...Shay this is just so awesome. Ever image rings in ones soul. This is a beautiful poem.<BR/><BR/><BR/>love-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10154460571183671852008-12-15T08:59:00.000-05:002008-12-15T08:59:00.000-05:00"The water lies so stillWhere I tossed my heart li..."The water lies so still<BR/>Where I tossed my heart like flowers--"<BR/><BR/>Shay I LOVE THIS !<BR/>Pensive and beautifully alluring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28376535537497743982008-12-14T21:21:00.000-05:002008-12-14T21:21:00.000-05:00Ah! David set you a challenge. (grin)Forlorn image...Ah! David set you a challenge. (grin)<BR/><BR/>Forlorn imagery of the flower petals breaking apart and floating away. As in the child's daisy game; Love Me, Love Me Not.<BR/><BR/>Your poem also brought a movie to my mind, which I added in to a poem:<BR/>I've Heard The Mermaids Singing,<BR/>so loudly my ears are ringing.<BR/>Close your ears to the siren's call<BR/>or into the sea you will fall<BR/><BR/>Is there a body of tears (water) in your word garden?<BR/><BR/>Sorry, I'm rambling on.<BR/><BR/>Oh Lord... Word Verification is:<BR/>mentubAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60467658054227601312008-12-14T21:12:00.000-05:002008-12-14T21:12:00.000-05:00LOL @ Vodka Mom giving it a "shot." Oddly appropri...LOL @ Vodka Mom giving it a "shot." Oddly appropriate!<BR/><BR/>Thanks, Shrinky. :-)<BR/><BR/>Thanks and welcome to the Word garden, CJ! :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64361297780141252522008-12-14T17:00:00.000-05:002008-12-14T17:00:00.000-05:00Very beautiful, very intense.Very beautiful, very intense.Martini Cartwheelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03906053155319523438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77408713465934172762008-12-14T12:05:00.000-05:002008-12-14T12:05:00.000-05:00Hauntingly wistful, and so beautifully written.Hauntingly wistful, and so beautifully written.Shrinkyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18401403773851253351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82727413251225253642008-12-14T11:04:00.000-05:002008-12-14T11:04:00.000-05:00The mermaid floatsalong the seaand takes my dreams...The mermaid floats<BR/><BR/>along the sea<BR/><BR/>and takes my dreams<BR/><BR/>away from me.....<BR/><BR/>i had to give it a shot. Yours was lovely.....Vodka Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04734323418017847775noreply@blogger.com