tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8742776550680858604..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The Check-UpFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61382865819573314262011-06-13T04:49:33.174-04:002011-06-13T04:49:33.174-04:00I think of all your poems that this is my favorite...I think of all your poems that this is my favorite so far. It goes right to the mystery of the human body and the vulnerability of the patient. Marvelous, Shay.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37908250151023009852011-06-11T19:42:49.469-04:002011-06-11T19:42:49.469-04:00My brain always goes totally blank when a doctor a...My brain always goes totally blank when a doctor asks me questions. Suddenly I become dumb as a bag of rocks! It's so humiliating.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63261735181823380792011-06-10T10:50:40.553-04:002011-06-10T10:50:40.553-04:00With your simple words, there is darkness. I like ...With your simple words, there is darkness. I like how how your poem speaks to me like a real person. Lovely. Just lovely.Aizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02900320846839982533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46145188746046978002011-06-10T03:30:55.141-04:002011-06-10T03:30:55.141-04:00deceptively childlike -
a deep, educated, poetic c...deceptively childlike -<br />a deep, educated, poetic child...<br /><br /><br />Aloha from Waikiki :)<br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /><br />><}}(°><br /><br /> <br /> ><}}(°><br /><br /><°)}}><Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18114175301349433292011-06-10T00:00:05.355-04:002011-06-10T00:00:05.355-04:00So nice I read it twice. Loved the cadence and th...So nice I read it twice. Loved the cadence and the dark play on words. If given the choice, this is one doctor that I'd do my best to avoid!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10442362785395286782011-06-09T22:19:16.447-04:002011-06-09T22:19:16.447-04:00You are such a strong n vivid writer !You are such a strong n vivid writer !Tabitha.Montgomeryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07462651710980805568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75929653091030434082011-06-09T20:59:57.244-04:002011-06-09T20:59:57.244-04:00Gloriously wonderful, and now I may put off the do...Gloriously wonderful, and now I may put off the doctor stuff for yet another week!!!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14903967720118250062011-06-09T20:42:50.479-04:002011-06-09T20:42:50.479-04:00This is so wickedly, darkly sinister! I love it.This is so wickedly, darkly sinister! I love it.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31816709329088197262011-06-09T20:34:31.290-04:002011-06-09T20:34:31.290-04:00you had me thinking "gahhhhh noooo" and ...you had me thinking "gahhhhh noooo" and feeling uneasy. Nice write. I like how it begins and ends in a similar manner and somewhere in the middle it kind of takes a side road.anonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05113247215140535686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48334363878276913212011-06-09T19:08:58.813-04:002011-06-09T19:08:58.813-04:00You obviously did not go to Dr. Feelgood. A cerebr...You obviously did not go to Dr. Feelgood. A cerebral and psychic check up straight from the ouija board, and there's no right answers for the spirits because they have them all in their own little cookie jar. But they are awfully picky if this doesn't satisfy them. I love especially the opening and closing bookends that support with lyric hands the dark leather of this medical encyclopedia of the soul.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20097933963933527262011-06-09T18:21:03.576-04:002011-06-09T18:21:03.576-04:00I agree... the part about the heart was awesome. S...I agree... the part about the heart was awesome. Sounds like the doctor has no bedside manner.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34522347011532560012011-06-09T12:06:50.002-04:002011-06-09T12:06:50.002-04:00Man, I could feel this right down to my toes. I h...Man, I could feel this right down to my toes. I have a dr. son-in-law and every time I ask him a medical question, he replies, "That's not my specialty." LOL! (He's a surgeon.)<br /><br />Awesome write, dearest!<br /><br />Love & Blessings,<br />MarionMarionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37739156589917793092011-06-09T10:37:07.342-04:002011-06-09T10:37:07.342-04:00doctors always leave me feeling exposed...and more...doctors always leave me feeling exposed...and more than just the gown...questions, questions...and probes...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18740056861976290682011-06-09T10:17:06.496-04:002011-06-09T10:17:06.496-04:00I agree with Lynn. The stanza that begins, "W...I agree with Lynn. The stanza that begins, "When your heart beats..." is brilliant.<br /><br />How come my doctor visits are so dull and dry, compared to yours?Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8855161980566127332011-06-09T08:57:52.138-04:002011-06-09T08:57:52.138-04:00White coat syndrome strikes againWhite coat syndrome strikes againDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29217769669673943232011-06-09T08:48:31.060-04:002011-06-09T08:48:31.060-04:00This is so lovely - all good questions! I was mesm...This is so lovely - all good questions! I was mesmerized by the time I got to the middle - I love the thought of a heart beat akin to a Chesapeake & Ohio train - rattling through your brain.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.com