tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8776356638961983157..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Rope 'Round A HeartFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73287114429903642032017-05-17T19:25:26.092-04:002017-05-17T19:25:26.092-04:00The gallows rope here sways in that creepy-excelle...The gallows rope here sways in that creepy-excellent way.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58868831907848136282017-05-10T17:18:03.183-04:002017-05-10T17:18:03.183-04:00It does have a jump rope rhythm.. I didn't not...It does have a jump rope rhythm.. I didn't notice it the first time I read it. Awesomeness!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57665346314057222202017-05-10T16:17:32.357-04:002017-05-10T16:17:32.357-04:00I said this incantation out loud and a genie appea...I said this incantation out loud and a genie appeared, and offered "I'll grant you any wish."<br />I said, "OK, make me a malted."<br />The Genie waved his hands and said "YOU"RE A MALTED!" <br /><br />So, thanks. Now I'm a damned malted. The poem was worth it, though. <br /><br />Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59792715602502535262017-05-10T16:17:11.261-04:002017-05-10T16:17:11.261-04:00Love it, almost like a jumprope rhyme :)Love it, almost like a jumprope rhyme :)Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89667344981050981812017-05-10T13:19:38.685-04:002017-05-10T13:19:38.685-04:00I always love the way you take this elf-created fo...I always love the way you take this elf-created form and jump it into new territory. Here the sense of being both bystander and participant, lover and watcher, is very present, even if mox nix is the prevalent philosophy of nuns, and none-s. Always a pleasure to read what lightning you are able to pull out of the ether, Shay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15121163331167462112017-05-10T02:48:13.493-04:002017-05-10T02:48:13.493-04:00Ooh, spooky and sinister, and the mystery tantalis...Ooh, spooky and sinister, and the mystery tantalising. Do we want to know the concrete details? Probably not!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11192107997669157792017-05-10T00:56:40.128-04:002017-05-10T00:56:40.128-04:00damn woman! do you HAVE to be so fucking good?!? o...damn woman! do you HAVE to be so fucking good?!? oh, i know you can't help it. a.maz.ing.Dani Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18012898548478062463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36842312250426745402017-05-09T23:09:19.446-04:002017-05-09T23:09:19.446-04:00This is just as scary as it is good. I can't s...This is just as scary as it is good. I can't stop reading it. It's almost like a mirror-in-the-dark chant that's going to unleash a dead priest and little-girl jumproper on me, haunting me to tell their twisted, mysterious versions of the same story.<br /><br />It creeps me the hell out, in other words.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65395636989240335822017-05-09T22:42:47.064-04:002017-05-09T22:42:47.064-04:00I'm like the rest--I love the rhythm of this p...I'm like the rest--I love the rhythm of this piece.<br /><br />AND I feel ignorant reading it, so I guess I need to look up a couple of words/phrases. ;)Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90239251658597286292017-05-09T21:38:05.402-04:002017-05-09T21:38:05.402-04:00Love the rhyme and rhythm.......Love the rhyme and rhythm.......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8654034100576229532017-05-09T20:39:41.881-04:002017-05-09T20:39:41.881-04:00Lovely lilt and cadence in this, Shay ❤️Lovely lilt and cadence in this, Shay ❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59917032481770925142017-05-09T19:29:15.980-04:002017-05-09T19:29:15.980-04:00uh-mazing. rhythm, rhyme, and spiceuh-mazing. rhythm, rhyme, and spiceAngiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413074557542736813noreply@blogger.com