tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8937153523490507833..comments2024-03-28T08:35:27.826-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Peacock and CrowsFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42432860937532304082013-05-15T07:41:16.151-04:002013-05-15T07:41:16.151-04:00I want that dress, and that hair, and that attitud...I want that dress, and that hair, and that attitude...<br />and a way to write poetry like that.<br />Immersed in the sin of envy I am, I am.<br />Breathless with the myriad images it conjures up. <br />Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57912394787084010112013-05-15T03:08:42.017-04:002013-05-15T03:08:42.017-04:00 Fireblossom siempre es un placer pasar por su blo... Fireblossom siempre es un placer pasar por su blog <br /> Saludos desde Creatividad e imaginación fotos de José Ramón<br />José Ramónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13225648135176195690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89076157809178549882013-05-14T21:48:36.264-04:002013-05-14T21:48:36.264-04:00Okay, first off, that's an awesome looking dre...Okay, first off, that's an awesome looking dress in that pic! <br /><br />Secondly: I love how everything around "her" has to do with nature. Makes me think that she's somehow tied more closely to nature than "normal" people...like some sort of kindred spirit.HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61396610674233453592013-05-14T17:18:12.591-04:002013-05-14T17:18:12.591-04:00Oh, Shay! I think this is one of your best. ever. ...Oh, Shay! I think this is one of your best. ever. I do.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61404997731257890922013-05-14T15:06:01.179-04:002013-05-14T15:06:01.179-04:00"and so she went strong and weedy within hers..."and so she went strong and weedy within herself"<br /><br />Damn. That entire stanza just blows me away. <br /><br />Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49383813440496508062013-05-14T14:46:37.661-04:002013-05-14T14:46:37.661-04:00I'm with Kerry. WHen you write about women I f...I'm with Kerry. WHen you write about women I feel understood in all my complexities. This woman, too, is in me. But how you find these rare words to describe us, ah, that's a gift, rare and true.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66252559425992432562013-05-14T12:24:44.900-04:002013-05-14T12:24:44.900-04:00I especially love the first six lines.I especially love the first six lines.Alicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09212391351233448784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37244372657699799922013-05-14T12:00:11.662-04:002013-05-14T12:00:11.662-04:00I note "holding her hair in one hand and his ...I note "holding her hair in one hand and his shears in the other". Yup, that's about right. Love it, and your last line is brilliant.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66248178582047547562013-05-14T10:16:55.020-04:002013-05-14T10:16:55.020-04:00Gnostic woes..
A murder of Crows..
Love the accent...Gnostic woes..<br />A murder of Crows..<br />Love the accent...Veracruze ?G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64290854199114657732013-05-14T09:28:42.607-04:002013-05-14T09:28:42.607-04:00her hips are as curved as cathedral bells
I love ... her hips are as curved as cathedral bells<br /><br />I love the combination of sacred and profane, and isn't this the essence of womanhood?<br /><br />I could write an essay on everything I love here, but will simply reiterate how much I adore your poetry about women. There is a depth of sincere admiration and kind understanding of our gender that goes a long way in my heart.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22839143729674376632013-05-14T09:19:06.051-04:002013-05-14T09:19:06.051-04:00so much fabulous imagery in each line! sheesh, sha...so much fabulous imagery in each line! sheesh, shay!TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19487707973628545652013-05-14T06:01:18.568-04:002013-05-14T06:01:18.568-04:00Mysterious and beautiful.Mysterious and beautiful.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70873163147371530612013-05-13T23:58:25.645-04:002013-05-13T23:58:25.645-04:00"wrapped in a mantilla of broody dark clouds,..."wrapped in a mantilla of broody dark clouds,"<br /><br />You blow my mind!<br /><br /><br />ALOHA<br /> from Waikiki<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> ~ > < } } ( ° > <3Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48343719012752965962013-05-13T23:36:26.174-04:002013-05-13T23:36:26.174-04:00Oh I'm going to have to read this way more tha...Oh I'm going to have to read this way more than twice, but that fourth stanza just kicks like a mule...and the ending, all the mysteries on wide, strong wings--I can see them flying off before I get a chance to look too closely...this is magic, in all the white ways, despite those black feathers.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com