tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8977199336009457841..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Love PoemFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52438765605762453392011-07-15T02:34:28.176-04:002011-07-15T02:34:28.176-04:00what better than to live fearlessly?
love every l...what better than to live fearlessly?<br /><br />love every line! ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18370652676927994252011-07-08T06:21:09.811-04:002011-07-08T06:21:09.811-04:00ya gotta kiss what kills ya, it's the only way...ya gotta kiss what kills ya, it's the only way to carry on living...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1476201996875435232011-07-07T22:49:10.684-04:002011-07-07T22:49:10.684-04:00I would wish for the heart of a wolf that I might ...I would wish for the heart of a wolf that I might live fiercely and fearlessly...and living long be damned!Lynette Killamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13747902602019771481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39451402577190812862011-07-07T18:30:03.098-04:002011-07-07T18:30:03.098-04:00Another great poem. Thanks for sharing.Another great poem. Thanks for sharing.Lisa Ricard Clarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05048410207952052295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74857160100792072682011-07-06T17:43:33.530-04:002011-07-06T17:43:33.530-04:00This is great poetry, the tone and flow is wonderf...This is great poetry, the tone and flow is wonderful. As mentioned prior lines such as "when you kiss what kills you" add greatness here. ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75471387804853989892011-07-06T12:50:40.723-04:002011-07-06T12:50:40.723-04:00My grandmother was the only woman I knew with a bu...My grandmother was the only woman I knew with a bullet wound through the left shoulder... Nothing to say any woman should be taken at face value - least of all this poet!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19855155020551058772011-07-06T11:50:37.560-04:002011-07-06T11:50:37.560-04:00You've created a piece that tells the truth of...You've created a piece that tells the truth of transition, of lessons learned, of boldness developed, and of self, appreciated. Well done!<br /><br />http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/07/05/dance-of-god-science/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28740734462855086512011-07-06T11:01:32.511-04:002011-07-06T11:01:32.511-04:00Those last three stanzas are quite amazing. I love...Those last three stanzas are quite amazing. I love the rhythm and the content.<br />Well done!cosmos camihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09558327124451076957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73148660821102166662011-07-06T10:46:20.225-04:002011-07-06T10:46:20.225-04:00Was you ever bit by a dead bee?
I read this poem ...Was you ever bit by a dead bee?<br /><br />I read this poem and kept thinking of that line of dialogue from To Have And Have NotDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80993953610555018292011-07-06T03:54:19.161-04:002011-07-06T03:54:19.161-04:00Love the language and the hints of dialect.Love the language and the hints of dialect.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91587815600815816902011-07-06T01:54:11.013-04:002011-07-06T01:54:11.013-04:00Glad to see The Quick And The Dead represented her...Glad to see The Quick And The Dead represented here. In my mind's eye I play the priest, but with a greater sense of self-preservation. Gene Hackman is my kooky brother-in-law, and for some reason the rancher guy from the pig movie Babe makes a guest appearance dispensing wisdom and fun sized Snickers bars.HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8331672568371007062011-07-06T00:24:08.591-04:002011-07-06T00:24:08.591-04:00you are one popular cowgirl!
Aloha from Waikiki
...you are one popular cowgirl!<br /><br />Aloha from Waikiki<br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /><br /> ><}}(°><br /><br /> <br /> > < } } ( ° ><br /><br />< ° ) } } > <Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63095097984817705172011-07-06T00:21:58.786-04:002011-07-06T00:21:58.786-04:00just.plain.cool. =)just.plain.cool. =)Patriciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00991524097486901864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50359942905655135092011-07-05T22:37:55.147-04:002011-07-05T22:37:55.147-04:00My first thought...You go girl! Wow, so strong and...My first thought...You go girl! Wow, so strong and fierce. I like it.CMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15697762495151569561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49969501376198404552011-07-05T22:37:24.160-04:002011-07-05T22:37:24.160-04:00Such spirit in this piece, Shay. When idea, langua...Such spirit in this piece, Shay. When idea, language and craft come together as they do here, it is indeed deep blue voodoo. So glad I stopped by for a visit this week. I'll be back again and again.Joseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81175568612515102092011-07-05T22:30:55.933-04:002011-07-05T22:30:55.933-04:00I love the tone of this-all the voodoo references....I love the tone of this-all the voodoo references. The last line is brilliant! I must object, however, to the aspersions cast upon the blameless poodle, which dances to show its natural exuberance and agility. Hmfph!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58202181473373277152011-07-05T22:17:24.207-04:002011-07-05T22:17:24.207-04:00Your poetry is gripping and your parting words kil...Your poetry is gripping and your parting words killed it...to live fearlessly is a brave thing to do. <br /><br />Thanks for your kind words in my blog.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24973559417064174472011-07-05T20:51:57.987-04:002011-07-05T20:51:57.987-04:00Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant.Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5347953712276160122011-07-05T19:55:19.333-04:002011-07-05T19:55:19.333-04:00" And when you kiss what kills you.." lo..." And when you kiss what kills you.." love it, I know the feeling. Shay, I love your writing.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18937800687031770382011-07-05T19:52:05.901-04:002011-07-05T19:52:05.901-04:00This spirit wishes to hand over it's creative ...This spirit wishes to hand over it's creative juices and bow to the absolutely fierce write you have penned. The ol'west ain't got nothing on you, hoodoo, voodoo, I bet you can turn lead into gold!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71086358125126680052011-07-05T19:27:10.044-04:002011-07-05T19:27:10.044-04:00Fabulously creative!Fabulously creative!Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73785117151685071422011-07-05T18:51:23.437-04:002011-07-05T18:51:23.437-04:00Loved this poem but this stanza grabbed me complet...Loved this poem but this stanza grabbed me completely:<br />Listen mister, I said--<br />Have you ever kissed a bullet?<br />Or left yourself for dead?<br />Because I have.<br />WOWChronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4194295035137223292011-07-05T18:24:42.266-04:002011-07-05T18:24:42.266-04:00FW and CB and HW out on the blasted heath, shakin...FW and CB and HW out on the blasted heath, shaking their verse moneymakers -- we are not worhy, we are not worthy! You empty your six shooters into this one, as dead-on and feral as I've ever read you -- <br /><br /><em>Some things are ridiculous on their face--<br />Old women in love,<br />Poodle dogs who dance in place.<br /><br />Listen mister, I said--<br />Have you ever kissed a bullet?<br />Or left yourself for dead?<br />Because I have... </em><br /><br />Blow on the barrel and ride on out of this corral. Not a contrary voice can be heard anywhere beneath the wings of this big long badlands wind. - BrendanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18271749214704840222011-07-05T18:19:53.508-04:002011-07-05T18:19:53.508-04:00Yeah, life is nasty, brutish and short no matter h...Yeah, life is nasty, brutish and short no matter how long you live. If it doesn't leave a few marks on you, what can you say about how you've lived? I say be fierce and fearless! I know you are!! Excellent as always.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34803889099741777492011-07-05T18:10:22.682-04:002011-07-05T18:10:22.682-04:00It's all so ironic that in the midst of the lo...It's all so ironic that in the midst of the love hangover, what works best is a little hair of the poodle dog!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.com