tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post9175993111797912367..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Night WorkFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45669956320374695562022-09-10T20:54:36.237-04:002022-09-10T20:54:36.237-04:00Love the crop circles, and the thought of night wo...Love the crop circles, and the thought of night work.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9479693741568056462022-09-08T15:31:07.574-04:002022-09-08T15:31:07.574-04:00To find a crop circle in my garden would probably ...To find a crop circle in my garden would probably make me believe the earth is flat.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81143639891074385812022-09-08T06:43:44.867-04:002022-09-08T06:43:44.867-04:00"It's crop circle night work
left by visi..."It's crop circle night work<br />left by visitors<br />that were." Mysterious and thought provoking! paeansunpluggedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15076601569836498915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91362540838100697072022-09-07T15:41:02.721-04:002022-09-07T15:41:02.721-04:00I love these lines, especially:
"Some wander...I love these lines, especially: <br />"Some wandering cat<br />or creature made sleepy by the dawn" <br /><br />I imagine a vampire cat, perhaps. Or moon-faerie grabbing a quick nap before flitting off to bed. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45866349000806557432022-09-07T12:58:34.428-04:002022-09-07T12:58:34.428-04:00"Crop circle night work": I love that! M..."Crop circle night work": I love that! Mysterious, magical, a sign of the unseen. <br />~DoraDorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10924099003278944038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88624577129901533782022-09-06T13:44:43.207-04:002022-09-06T13:44:43.207-04:00Thanks much, Shay <3Thanks much, Shay <3JadeLihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74148365984393372432022-09-06T11:34:22.751-04:002022-09-06T11:34:22.751-04:00The night holds so much wonder and you can feel it...The night holds so much wonder and you can feel it in these lines Shay! A wonderful and lovely quadrille!Carrie Burtthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15016231028602947306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1027573327429491492022-09-06T03:55:43.586-04:002022-09-06T03:55:43.586-04:00Night work indeed! I love the mystery in your quad...Night work indeed! I love the mystery in your quadrille, Shay, the symmetry of it, the way you start with a contentious ‘the earth is flat’ and then put it in a flowering place close to! My cats do that all the time.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14595132991652307002022-09-05T22:53:25.594-04:002022-09-05T22:53:25.594-04:00I love the idea of imagining crop circles where cr...I love the idea of imagining crop circles where critters bed down. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84384511265174082282022-09-05T21:48:45.253-04:002022-09-05T21:48:45.253-04:00I like where you went with this. I thought you mig...I like where you went with this. I thought you might have found a size 13 boot print on the plant, creating back story interest. Glenn Buttkushttp://bibliosity.blogspot.com/2022/09/sledgehammer.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23681587399446419482022-09-05T21:37:19.460-04:002022-09-05T21:37:19.460-04:00Fabulous wordsmithing! Fabulous wordsmithing! Carol Congaltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09802368671162764611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20549077844697931442022-09-05T20:51:49.691-04:002022-09-05T20:51:49.691-04:00The truth is out there, maybe right outside your w...The truth is out there, maybe right outside your window.robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77839480500037190712022-09-05T20:48:56.605-04:002022-09-05T20:48:56.605-04:00Love the symmetry. You've created crop circles...Love the symmetry. You've created crop circles in your work. Bravo!!K.Hartlesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17934770603947927048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32997954654177038572022-09-05T20:10:31.463-04:002022-09-05T20:10:31.463-04:00Very nicely done! An interesting take on the work...Very nicely done! An interesting take on the work of creating a crop circle.Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19827385646066569002022-09-05T20:04:49.975-04:002022-09-05T20:04:49.975-04:00Epigram removed, poem edited. Epigram removed, poem edited. Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16281249282751022302022-09-05T19:49:55.959-04:002022-09-05T19:49:55.959-04:00Shay, such a beautiful microcosm. I like the sugg...Shay, such a beautiful microcosm. I like the suggestion that there's a lot that goes on after we go to sleep. <br /><br />I did a word count on your quadrille. If it would have added up to 44 with the epigram (which is an awesome pithy phrase btw) it would be fine; however the verse below totals 44. Your choice of keeping the epigram in and shortening the verse, adding "work" somewhere in the verse itself, or submitting a different Q for the prompt.JadeLihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.com