Thursday, January 5, 2017

Port Of Call


Hey sailor,
this is the lunch counter
anyone can sit at.

Hey handsome,
buy a girl a soda?
They'll bring one glass, two straws.

Tell me, Lonesome,
why aren't you in the bar? Do the stools there
pitch and yaw?

Too bad, swabbie,
about the girl you left behind.
Do ya miss her? Do I remind you of?

Listen, sugar,
set your sea bag down. Noah knew
--bet you do, too--
that a pigeon is still a dove.
______

for "escape to the past" at Real Toads

 

14 comments:

Sioux said...

Shay--The photo and poem are a perfect pairing. Also, a Doors song I've never heard.

Kim Russell said...

I can't believe we chose the same image, Shay! I love what you've done with it.

Lynn said...

So cool.

hedgewitch said...

Any port in a storm, those sailors--I think the sea is a very teaching mistress. This is just delightful, Shay, full of razor sharp lines under the seeming simplicity. I especially like the bar stool reference.

brudberg said...

You capture both the sailor and the girl so well. Delightful with a little flirt.

Cloudia said...

A dove is just a pigeon in drag. So what is this, a fabulous Shay caption competition with yourself? I like it

Kerry O'Connor said...

Ah, I love the conclusion.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I especially love the closing lines. Made me smile. I picked that photo too but the remembering didnt write itself well enough to post.

Rommy said...

I like the sly propositioning going on here - very lighthearted on the surface, but rather knowing once you read it carefully.

Mama Zen said...

Killer closing lines!

Magaly Guerrero said...

The last few lines are brilliant. Goodness knows I saw a lot of Marines and Sailors reaching that conclusion... and setting down their seabags.

angieinspired said...

what a wench. what a wrench

Jennifer Wagner said...

A chance encounter? I think not!

Gillena Cox said...

Luv the video, luv the conversation

"Listen, sugar,
set your sea bag down. Noah knew
--bet you do, too--
that a pigeon is still a dove."

hope those two end on the mountain top with dry feet

much love...