Reanimated Lavender Granola Switchblade Nun rides again.

Tuesday, June 17, 2025

Travel Advisory

 

In Denver, poems stay up in the Rockies at night
only rolling down Colfax Avenue in bright afternoon,
hanging out in the vanished record store with
Allen Ginsburg, waiting for night to howl at the moon.

In Toronto, you can catch a touristy rickshaw
or hustle some change at night on Yonge street
depending where on the grayscale you fall,
and the poems there wear boots and are desperate/sweet.

In Manila you can take your poem to a fine hotel
or share Italian in a restaurant where they let you write on the wall,
then get starry/holy at one of the cathedrals
and set out before dawn to hunt up some warm pan de sal.

But in London there are no poems, they've all
fallen into the gap, been run over by trains,
gotten rat-tired of curry and black-coat robots.
Nerves fried, orphan-empty, they sick in the streets, 

cut out their tongues, and die whenever it rains.
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for Word Garden Word List--Iron Horse

Music: Leo Kottke Eight Miles High




6 comments:

  1. Your poems really leave me gob-smacked. I dont know how you come up with these ideas. I love the idea of poems in these various places.......each premise so imaginative and amazing. AND you blow my mind with how far the list words took you. Fantastic writing.

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  2. Some powerful imagery and a real sense of discovery and tuning into cultures and places around the globe - Jae

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  3. Oh wow. The citied fates poetry! Incredible! (jo)

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  4. I was looking for 'travel; stories for girls' as soon as I read the second stanza--I see the stories here are more inclusive. A clever and vital peer into the cultural/emotional aura a place can contain and convey. Beautiful and sharply apt descriptors and a scalpel-like honesty pervade the whole poem--a very satisfying read, and I feel that I've been to these places now and seen their own particular truths.

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  5. Here come my baseball metaphors, which, since we're both fans, I hope are acceptable. Each stanza here is a home run on its own and the whole thing is, to quote the great Dave Niehaus, "get out the rye bread and mustard, Grandma, it's grand salami time!" Not sure how it was even possible, but your swing just got grittier and prettier. Fan girl, out.

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  6. "fallen into the gap" Mind the gap!! Allen on Colfax. Weird factoid - Colfax used to be Mansion Row, but went to seed. I love the last two lines of this. "orphan-empty" is perfect.

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