Reanimated Lavender Granola Switchblade Nun rides again.

Saturday, February 23, 2019

Upon Receiving My Woodstock Chimes

Asian pear tree branch
mother of April's white blooms 
hosts brass temple bells 

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A hai...ha...hik...
A three line poem for "Season Your Poetry"

Someone activate the holo-doctor. I feel funny.
 
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15 comments:

  1. brudbergFebruary 23, 2019 at 4:10 PM

    Love the way you brought in all the senses in this... yet far to April still

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  2. Carrie Van HornFebruary 23, 2019 at 4:17 PM

    I have witnessed a true miracle!! A haiku on Shays blog!!! It is a beautiful one Shay! I think i need to see the Dr. too cause I am still in shock! Love this so much Shay the poem is lovely and the holo-doctor made me laugh so hard at work (in the library) :-)))

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  3. MargaretFebruary 23, 2019 at 4:31 PM

    Gasp... (just fell on floor) the impossible is possible.

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  4. FireblossomFebruary 23, 2019 at 4:42 PM

    You guys..... LOL

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  5. HelenFebruary 23, 2019 at 5:01 PM

    Brava!

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  6. tonispencerFebruary 23, 2019 at 5:19 PM

    Mos def sloth approved Shay. After I gasped at the beauty of this, I had a good laugh. You bamboozled us all fren. Thank you for this. Love you.

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  7. Susie ClevengerFebruary 23, 2019 at 8:22 PM

    You can write haiku... :) Love it!

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 23, 2019 at 10:38 PM

    The world is ending. Shay wrote haiku! And so perfectly. I love it.

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  9. Kerry O'ConnorFebruary 24, 2019 at 4:45 AM

    It's all about the sensory imagery... those bells and white petals. lovely.

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  10. Magaly GuerreroFebruary 24, 2019 at 9:13 AM

    "Please state the nature of the medical emergency." Then, let us ring those bells, bells, bells...

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  11. purplepeninportland.comFebruary 24, 2019 at 8:32 PM

    This is gorgeous, Shay!

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  12. Kim M. RussellFebruary 25, 2019 at 2:00 AM

    It rang my bell, Shay! Don’t choke on haiku – call it a three line poem and be damned!

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  13. grapelingFebruary 26, 2019 at 1:51 AM

    oh, it's surely the end times ~

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  14. Rosemary Nissen-WadeFebruary 26, 2019 at 3:35 PM

    So beautiful!

    Ha ha, demonstrating that you can do something so well gives you greater authority to criticise that thing.

    (But be careful. Haiku are addictive.)

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  15. Maude LynnFebruary 27, 2019 at 3:19 PM

    So . . . the end really is near . . .

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