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Saturday, December 4, 2021

In Bohemia

 

In Bohemia, where the Moldau
flows and hollyhocks rise beside the cottages,
I went, as a child, into the dark woods to escape 
the terrors of the monster behind the door of mine.

At night in Bohemia, where the wolves
go and the moon rises over the trees beyond the cottages,
I rose with it in the night to escape nightmares
as the wolves sang to me like imaginary mothers.

In Bohemia there are hands, and cookies shaped like hands
full of sugar and poison. In the mornings the monster
fed me hate because I was a mirror, but the wolves
told me I was a lake and a home for the wandering moon.

In Bohemia, there are little girls carrying wicker baskets
beside the shores of the Moldau, where the rooks rise.
The rooks are born from ice in the blood of monsters
and they say, "we are the rooks, we love you," as they peck.

In Bohemia, by the shores of the Moldau, many children
disappear, into forests, or ovens, where monsters sent them.
The wolves heard of this and began to follow ceaselessly,
so closely that I became them, and they became me.

In Bohemia, where the Moldau 
flows and hollyhocks rise beside the cottages,
a Gypsy girl and her wolves shrank a monster
who starved on its own poison cookies.

So I ask you now, Sir or Madame come down the lane,
to my fairy cottage by a lake beneath a golden moon,
looking for love and loaves and a soft situation,
do you really want to fuck with me and my wolves?

Better you should go, and take your monsters with you.
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for The Sunday Muse #189, where I am hosting. 





20 comments:

  1. Everything about this is so distinctively your own, Shay, from the hollyhocks and wolves to the monster that poisons its victims with and finally itself, as many of them do if they live long enough. I love the way this winds, as if following a path in the woods of the heart, deep and dark and secret--dangerous, too--til we end finally at the golden reward, and the defiance of survival. The rooks are brilliant, as are all the images here. Fine, strong writing.

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  2. You are a survivor indeed Shay! This deep and lovely poem assures us of that. I especially love the third stanza of the mirror lake metaphor. It is what makes your poetry speak so loud and beautifully of things some do not know or cannot imagine knowing. Thank you again for hosting and for a magnificent picture and poem from you!!

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  3. I love the wolves singing to you like imaginary mothers, and telling you you were a lake and a home for the wandering moon. Well, I love every line, no use repeating them all. I ADORE the ending!!!!!!!!! Your story poems are completely amazing. You have an endless source of inspiration the rest of us can merely admire, in awe.

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  4. Oh my goodness, I've read this several times already, first silently, then with Smetana's music as soundtrack and just felt myself submerged in a tragic yet hopeful narrative which by the end is so triumphant as to conquer every monster behind every smooth face and every shadow. I love the repetition of Bohemia and Moldau, the chant-like quality of a certain inner stasis it adds as the scenes shift and alter.The dark woods as refuge, with its denizens as protectors to hold the savage "civilized" Sir or Madam at bay is a stinging ironic touch. And more, it is simply beautiful, like "a lake and a home for the wandering moon." You've stolen my heart with this one, Shay.
    Pax,
    Dora

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  5. Only you can tell a story like this. Brava.

    My first favorite:
    “as the wolves sang to me like imaginary mothers.
    In Bohemia there are hands”

    I love the contradiction in this:
    “they say, ‘we are the rooks, we love you,’ as they peck”

    “looking for love and loaves and a soft situation” ... another favorite

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  6. It’s funny, I wrote my poem to this prompt before I read any others, as I don’t like to be influenced, now, reading this I can pick out quite a few similarities in routes taken. I suppose that’s what the photo gives us, and perhaps I’m just patting myself on the back, because I admire your writing so. Though, I must say, I think yours is much better than mine. Braver too. The tapestry you’ve woven is ready to be hung in any Slavic royal hall. Mystical, dark and confronting - especially the last stanza (is confronting), wow, fair play. You bite and it draws blood, every time. This is art.

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  7. Love the sway of the words in this, how they mesmerize and conjure at the same time. With the exception of that second-to-last stanza, I could well believe I'd read this before in one of the old, wood-cut illustrated books my grandparents had on the shelves.

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  8. Shay--After reading it once, I had my two favorite lines. Then I reread it several times, and fell especially in love with the first and third stanza. The photo? Wow. Of course, the music works in tandem with the poem. The second-to-last line and the last stand-alone line were incredibly powerful.

    And KSHE 95? How do you know of Sweetmeat? ;)

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    1. I lived in SW Illinois for 17 months a long time ago and loved KSHE. Then this summer I discovered that they have an app so I put it on my iPod and have KSHE again. I'm in the KSHE Rock Army!

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  9. Everyone--forgive me for not answering all of you individually. I am hosting Sunday Muse this weekend, and my own Word List prompt tomorrow, plus the trivia of my daily life, so please just know that all of these beautiful comments meant a great deal to me. Thank you for them!

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  10. "the wolves sang to me like imaginary mothers" - Oooh! And, uh, no, I'm not going to mess with you and your wolves...

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  11. The second stanza is stellar and this whole piece is amazing. Too many parts to quote, so I will just say this is one of your most creative poems with an subliminal message as well.

    Happy Sunday

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  12. Wow! So much lurks between the lines, above and below the lines. Oozing all over the forest. Never would I be so brazen as to fuck with you ~ or the wolves!

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  13. Shay I love what I'm calling a fractured fairy tale. You spun a good and powerful one here.

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  14. Better you should go,
    and take your monsters with you.

    Love the no-nonsense confidence shown Shay. One has to be taking the upper hand when it comes to dishing out ultimatums. Great prompt, Ma'am! Wondering quite a bit on how to go about it!

    Hank

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  15. Very interesting and captivating. I found myself very happy with the lines,
    "Gypsy girl and her wolves shrank a monster
    who starved on its own poison cookies."
    If I had my way all monsters would be jailed.
    Same for the unvaccinated.
    Thanks for hosting, this was a neat prompt picture.
    ..

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  16. This is absolutely gorgeous, Shay! The spooky fairytale imagery and the chilling thrilling narrative just leads you astray straight into the woods with no place to hide. One can only give in to the wolves or be consumed. Bohemia has a dark side, it is not all flower gardens and tinkling bells.

    Every stanza is wonderful but I love the maternal wolves in this one:
    "At night in Bohemia, where the wolves
    go and the moon rises over the trees beyond the cottages,
    I rose with it in the night to escape nightmares
    as the wolves sang to me like imaginary mothers."

    And I love the way it ends <3 <3

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  17. Fascinating, strong, defiant, mystical, magical, and wonderful Shay! What a fantastical tale of deeply protective love and understanding that crosses boundaries.

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  18. Your very own fairytale! I could hear the wolves singing
    like imaginary mothers. Excellent piece, Shay!

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  19. There's nothing like your voice when you write. Love it from first word to your fiery ending!

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