whether driving or
receiving the EMT's fist on their heart as the sirens sing.
--must always be admitted only to hospitals with gardens,
preferably in some Spanish-speaking
hotbox of stucco-and-tile Catholic gin confusion.
--operate in a fog as reluctant circus cannon balls,
making door knockers of their own bones
and entering-and-breaking every secret heart in mid-air.
--arrive at the wedding of themselves to themselves
reciting vows from codebooks
once the property of some demolished poet-angel (body never recovered.)
--have no hero except the homunculus oracle
who keeps them awake all night
weaving flowers around their ears, lit and inextinguishable.
--translate that thing you always felt but couldn't say,
wear codex clothing
and trespass the afterlife with a Gladstone bag and a talking bird,
in failing health, strong as vinegar, needed but not wanted in all 50 states.
_________
for Word Garden Word List--The Legacy of Ladysmith
and shared with The Sunday Muse # 247.
image at top: BLOOMS by Anna Shuleit.
image at bottom: Charlotte Gainsbourg
Music: Paulo Nutini Iron Sky (utterly amazing)
Love what you did with the image, this is my favourite stanza --must always be admitted only to hospitals with gardens,
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hotbox of stucco-and-tile Catholic gin confusion. PS someone has said that the image I have used in my post is you sorry if this is the case can I will remove it if it is https://poetisatinta.wordpress.com/2023/02/19/sunday-muse-11/comment-page-1/#comment-5076 (AJ)
This is amazing, with so many arresting lines and images. I especially love poets arriving at the wedding of themselves to themselves. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteOK, that's incredible.
ReplyDeleteIt's all amazing but I can't take this: "making door knockers of their own bones" That is so first rate it hurts.
ReplyDeleteOne day a poet somewhere will have a word list prompt and you Shay will be the featured poet. So many lines with imagery that could knock the socks off a baseball player! Love this my friend!!!!
ReplyDeleteHow fabulous! Makes me proud to be a poet. I love these images! I love what it expresses about the reach and the scope of poetry. And I love what it says about the pain and the confusion of what inspire a poem. Totally enjoyable and absolutely relatable.
ReplyDeleteExcellent use of those prompt words, Ladysmith! Oh for that 2nd stanza on a plaque! My daddy was a gin aficionado (but never confused) and I only ever want to be in a hospital with gardens.
ReplyDeleteThis is all just so wonderful. But this, especially this:
ReplyDelete"--arrive at the wedding of themselves to themselves
reciting vows from codebooks
once the property of some demolished poet-angel (body never recovered.)"
But the whole thing. Literally literary perfection *kisses fingers* <3
And, btw, I totally think you should write a novel! It would be awesome!!!
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ReplyDeleteLove that line, and many others in this striking poem, Shay!
Always such unique word pairings and images. I smiled at so many... but the standout one is... is... hmmm... (too many) love the hospital but the ending line is just so damn good.
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