I really like your poetry, very intelligently written. :) Poetry is actually my favorite medium as well, but I've put a pause on my poetry blogs till I graduate and have time to actually add to them again. Thanks for your comment. :)
Do I sense a haiku-like element of less-is-more here? *ducks* Whatever it is, I like it--tight and extremely succinct--you can't boil it down any cleaner than this. Of the two reposts, both excellent, this is my favorite.
Ha! You wrapped this one up very neatly, and the choice of comparative flowers replaces the need for lengthy explanations. Flowers used to a most effective degree here.
Wonderfully clever as well
ReplyDeleteas seductive.
Thank you, Cynthia. Like you, sometimes I find brevity says more.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poetry, very intelligently written. :) Poetry is actually my favorite medium as well, but I've put a pause on my poetry blogs till I graduate and have time to actually add to them again. Thanks for your comment. :)
ReplyDeleteDo I sense a haiku-like element of less-is-more here? *ducks* Whatever it is, I like it--tight and extremely succinct--you can't boil it down any cleaner than this. Of the two reposts, both excellent, this is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteLove this one! I love the short choppy lines.
ReplyDeleteYep, a definite haiku element (runs and hides behind Hedge).
ReplyDeleteWow! So much, but never too much, just all the right words in the right order. Love it!
ReplyDeleteSassy. Bold. Love this.
ReplyDeleteHa!
ReplyDeleteYou wrapped this one up very neatly, and the choice of comparative flowers replaces the need for lengthy explanations. Flowers used to a most effective degree here.