Poetry and such like.
That sigh made all the difference...
Yes, that sigh says a great deal. Loved this, Shay.
How spare, rich, lovely! All cats are gray in the dark, all lovers quicken one's pulse - esp in the dusky dark
A very sweet poem; a first stair is also a first step here; it is (to me) a very subtle way to talk of reconciliation. k.
"... the first stair."Gor.Geous.
Lovely. Even with that soft rug, I'll hear you, am listening for you.
The subtle impression of pain is really effective!
Spare and beautiful.
you always make me "FEEL."thank you.
What a lovely way to imagine yourself into the picture.
Bittersweet surprise ending. Nicely done, Shay.
luv the turn of tone at the "sigh"much love...
~sigh~ very pretty!
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