Reanimated Lavender Granola Switchblade Nun rides again.

Sunday, May 19, 2024

Crow & Astrolabe

 

Crow, obscured by wing and leaf,
there we were
under the stars.

Who knew then that we would bond
over common language
and common loneliness. 

You came when you would, and not that often,
like others of your kind
I had known before.

I thought, if I can crack the seed your heart will open
starved as you were
starved as I was. 

Crow so black against indigo sky, I lacked
Rosetta Stone
or Tarot deck.

So, I wrote you poems upon an astrolabe
looking for heaven
Deus ex machina.

Crow with your song in ghost-ship semaphore,
you sang to me
beautifully

Yet crows are crows, and stars are reclusive.
Astrolabe and downdraft
broke both our hearts.

I have learned wariness of crows, and they the same
both poorer but safer
for such sad education.

Still, I have my astrolabe, an antique affectation
like the love I once had
for an obscure bird.
_________




Jennifer over at Poet Laundry--no doubt prodded to do so by a thousand devils--challenged me to write a poem about or including an astrolabe. This is that poem. I encourage you to go visit her there; she is a genuine peach of a poet. 

Music: Alana Davis Can't Find My Way Home


5 comments:

  1. Just like that?! That fast?? Just like that you come up with this spectacular poem?! This poem has everything I love about a Shay poem. Fabulous metaphors like no one else even thinks of, deep heart stuff, beauty in the dark, loneliness, and love—even love in fragments. Who needs Rosetta Stone or Tarot?! Poetry, of course, communicates best of all. “Deus ex machina” …are you reading my google searches or what?! I was just reading more about this like yesterday or something. If I were in high school, I would print this poem and put it up on my wall with my posters. But since I am not (thank God), I will bookmark it to read again and again. Plus, I love those cool images and that perfect, soulsy (yes, I just made that word up, but you know what I mean) song. Wow, Shay, be careful or I will have to challenge you again to write something you claim you can’t do. 😉

    ReplyDelete
  2. Yes, as Jennifer says - lines like only you can write. That fourth stanza made me ache..........sigh. So absolutely wonderful.

    ReplyDelete
  3. "You came when you would, and not that often,/like others of your kind/I had known before..." This and the following stanza pulled water from my eyes. Just masterly, Shay. The triplet stanzas are perfect for the brevity with a hook you offer, and the metaphors exquisite.

    ReplyDelete
  4. "I wrote you poems upon an astrolabe looking for heaven Deus ex machina." That is so good.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Beautiful poem. It's bittersweet sadness encapsulated particularly in this stanza for me:

    "I have learned wariness of crows, and they the same
    both poorer but safer
    for such sad education."

    ReplyDelete

Spirit, what do you wish to tell us?