calling, crying, appearing--clearly mine.
She displayed an instant madness, an affinity for the moon
accepting only pomegranate and warm plum wine
as Nurse counted up the medications and the spoons.
We communicate by carvings, deep and raw
and love words mercurial and gritty as a dune,
that respect no wound, no custom, no law.
My elephant child, heavy, hunted, wise
eludes rubber-handed teachers of the exhausted strike
arriving in little rowboats in full courtly disguise
to mine my little darling as she rides her phantasmal bike
down to the grave of stars to kiss the thing that dies
in a tiny wooden cradle beneath a concrete sun
to bring it back, to make it rise
and then her work is done.
Come, child of animals, black earth and fire
to the shelter I have cobbled from discarded turtle shells
where poets burn on pages, porches, pyres
and all variety of heavens, limbos, hells
to arrange your dolls named Judgement and Desire
who sit on silken pillows or in coffins fit with bells
to call their mothers, those beauties, belles and hags
combined into an advocate for my child with tongue flat-felled
by a celebrated seamstress, dumbly mute and dressed in rags.
_____
for Word Garden Word List--Anne Sexton
Music:
Sin City
Sin City
Fantastic. I especially love the 2nd stanza. (abigfatcanofworms)
ReplyDeleteI love how you have woven such beautiful images and lilting rhythm to describe such a hard-hitting narrative - Jae
ReplyDeleteA stunner of a poem, with such a sure and knowing touch on every line. Your use of rhyme is exquisiteh, enhancing each stanza without ever becoming forced; in fact it is so seamless one is constantly surprised to find it there again, never hammering, just lightly coloring in the point. The pain of creation illustrated, the searing but ever lucid language, are just superlative, Shay. One of your very very best, and I am both shaken and enlarged by its truths. I especially love the apt image of the hunted elephant child, the rare and endangered thing stalked. Just amazing work,
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DeleteYes, stunning. The rhymes were so effortless I didn't even notice them at first. It is all amazing, but the end of the middle stanza hit me the hardest. "to kiss the thing that dies..." and then "to bring it back, to make it rise..." but of course we can't bring back the dead, so her task is endless and loss-filled, "her work is done" opening like a trap-door beneath our feet.
ReplyDeleteYou channeled Ms. Sexton beautifully ... I especially love "to arrange your dolls named Judgement and Desire” ~ amazing poetry, Shay.
ReplyDeleteWell spotted. I used the same rhyme scheme and number of stanzas as Sexton's poem "Her Kind" but the content is all mine.
DeleteWhat a powerful poem. So many beautiful lines. My favorites:
ReplyDelete"We communicate by carvings, deep and raw
and love words mercurial and gritty as a dune,
that respect no wound, no custom, no law."
Oh my gosh Shay, just when I think you couldn't amaze me more with your poetry, you write this one. There is way too much in it that stands out to just choose a few lines. This is one of my favorites. Bravo!
ReplyDelete"An affinity for the moon." - how wonderful. I love "my elephant child" and "down to the grave of stars to kiss the thing that dies." No one writes like you. This is just superb writing. This poem builds to its stunning third stanza and leaves the reader in awe. Wow.
ReplyDeleteBy the end of the first stanza this poem just keeps picking up steam and does not quit. I would quote the lines others have above and use the word "stunning" to describe it as well. Also, Dwight Yoakam is one of my favorite country artists. I saw him in concert last year and at 68 years old he is still phenomenal.
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