simple, yet effective, the first stanza makes this poem, as then the use of the word 'heart' makes literal and metaphorical sense.
Very lovely poem Shay, sweetand seductive and the eroticimage you have here is perfect.
Thank you, ladies. I normally only post poems here that I have lived with for a while, but this one I just wrote last night. I'm glad you like it!
Darkly magnificent.
Thanks you, WW. I have to be in a certain space to write this kind of poem, but they seem to turn out well. I'm glad you found it so.
"Take this silver blade--Slide it under my skin, let yourself in" ... Sheesh. THAT is an invitation! Like a letter opener to an envelope.
Spirit, what do you wish to tell us?
simple, yet effective, the first stanza makes this poem, as then the use of the word 'heart' makes literal and metaphorical sense.
ReplyDeleteVery lovely poem Shay, sweet
ReplyDeleteand seductive and the erotic
image you have here is perfect.
Thank you, ladies. I normally only post poems here that I have lived with for a while, but this one I just wrote last night. I'm glad you like it!
ReplyDeleteDarkly magnificent.
ReplyDeleteThanks you, WW. I have to be in a certain space to write this kind of poem, but they seem to turn out well. I'm glad you found it so.
ReplyDelete"Take this silver blade--
ReplyDeleteSlide it under my skin, let yourself in" ... Sheesh. THAT is an invitation! Like a letter opener to an envelope.