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Friday, September 18, 2009

Anniversary



Anniversary.

Warm restaurant.

Such happiness.

She takes her hand.

Candles burn in bowls,

A baby grows in her womb.

"At last."

Smiles.

Tears.

Joy.

Good food.

Outside, leaves, concrete, a chill.

They kiss and hold hands.

Voices behind.

"Yo, what you need is a man."

Hospital.

Wife and baby gone.

Devastation.

Pain beyond bearing.

Anniversary.

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True story.

15 comments:

  1. These 55 words really do tell an entire story. Sad to hear it's true. Very nice to visit a new blogger.

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  2. Yep...Your writing is always POWERFUL!
    WOW!!
    Excellent 55 Shay...
    Thanks for wilting to my wishes, I really appreciate it..
    Have a Kick-Ass Week-End...G

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  3. To quote you: I don't know how you do it. I wouldn't know where to begin!

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  4. Wonderful, magical use of those 55 .. as always you hit it spot on.

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  5. this is harsh. you've managed to convey so much in so few words.

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  6. Hmmm You are good with words Woman Poet.. Devastating it is yes
    Great 55 (1st prize)
    :)

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  7. Fantastic 55. Tells a horrible story so well.


    Mine is posted

    HERE.

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  8. That is powerful, beautiful and sad...and silly me, I was thinking about doing a Friday 55 about piggies!

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  9. Wow, this one really blew me away! My heart sunk at the end. Good job, amiguita!

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  10. Man, life is a bitch! But you say it sooo much better.

    PS I loved Rachel's Wedding. I'm the dad character:(

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  11. Very powerful use of 55 words.

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  12. Bummer. Amazing how you incite such strong feelings with so few words. Words are powerful.

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  13. I have so much enjoyed taking part for the very first time. I will be contributing next Friday too. I find you via David, a great blogging friend too. How we all connect eh?

    Right off to write a poem for another new project on Monday, subject My Home Town!

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  14. You've definitely mastered the flash fiction 55!

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