Millicent Menzies-McPhee
Invited me over for tea.
The mood was torpid, the talk was vapid;
The descent into fidgety misery was rapid.
Millicent droned on and on and on
About her dismal daughter and stuporous son;
Neither was wedded, or even employed,
And of any interest completely devoid.
I sighed and suffered and wished I were dead,
As my mind dissolved and my poor ears bled,
Then, unable to take it, I exploded in laughter,
Took off my clothes and swung from the rafter.
"More tea?"
Inquired Ms. Menzies McPhee.
I said, "You are a tiresome, torturous bimbo!"
As the S.W.A.T. team came and rappelled in her window.
I was removed to the sanitarium post haste,
Which saved her life with not a second to waste.
And the moral is, most obviously,
If you want to have tea...
Don't have it with Millicent
Menzies-
McPhee!
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for Ella's photo challenge at Real Toads.
delightful, yet subversive! Gorey?
ReplyDeleteWho was that guy who wrote lyrics & children's books like this?
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But she has cookies!
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of the child's poem about James James Morrison Morrison Weatherby Fitz Dupree or whatever it was. (Slightly updated, of course.) Most delightful.
so just what was in the tea? smiles...haha...you know there are quite a few formal occassions in which i would def want to swing from the rafters and tell the host the truth, but...smiles. fun read shay.
ReplyDeleteThis could--almost--sit side-by-side with some Shel Silverstein poems.
ReplyDeleteThere are too many times that I'd like to take off my clothes and swing from the rafters. One day, perhaps I will...
The Mad Hatter would love this tea party~ I enjoyed the tone and the insanity of being in hot water! It was steeped in fun~ ;D
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this! Hee hee. I picked the teapot too. Love the swinging from the rafters, which I have not even done when drinking stronger stuff than tea. But my mom climbed the Christmas tree once, after drinking red wine. Does that count? ;-)
ReplyDeleteI can't tell you how many times I've wanted to take my clothes off and swing from the rafters (I've even considered the possibility of doing it at work so they will retire me early on a nice fat mental disability pension!!)
ReplyDeleteI love a cup of tea but would certainly object to the McPhees of the world spoiling it for me.
.. and you thought she served tea? Jack Nicholson was spied leaving shortly before you! Case closed.
ReplyDeleteThis cup of tea you served was most delightful.
ReplyDeletethis had so much rythm, great tempo, smart whimsy.
I bet you play a 'mean' guitar.
thank you for refreshening my air just now. :P
What an awesome poem. I loved the sing-song rhyming pattern. I felt like a child reading a grown-up poem. Well done!! ;-) xo
ReplyDeleteOh, Shay, I loved this! I have actually known people this boring, and the only thing that kept me from wanting to swing from the rafters was my own fear of heights.
ReplyDeleteWhat fun!
Luv, K
Hell with Millicent Menzies McPhee-I'll invite you for tea! Although I don't have rafters in my house, so you'll have to swing from my overhead lights if I'm not entertaining enough.
ReplyDeleteI love it, I love it, I love it!
ReplyDeleteLove the name Millicent! instead of calling her Milli, i'd call her Cent and see if i could fix her up with fifty cent ~ he's on tour all of the time leavin' his mansion empty... bet there's lotsa rafters in his place!
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I love this. There have been times I have been so bored by tea and baloney I have been ready to swing from the rafters.
ReplyDeleteI know people like her, and oh how I wish I could have swung from the rafters! What a fun poem...I love it!
ReplyDeleteVery cool
ReplyDeletePurely delightful!!! It needs to be illustrated --- what a fun read and what imagination!
ReplyDeleteI smiled my way through this one and the comment leavers are right - it needs clever whimsical illustrations
ReplyDeleteOne second I'm crying over the teapot and in the next I'm swinging with you from the rafters! First had me thinking of 'Keeping up appearances', but then swung straight into my favourite Tom Sharpe character Wilt! Loved it!!!
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