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Tuesday, October 15, 2024

Donostia

 

Teacher says that every time a bell rings
she is awakened in the night and lies there
remembering the bay at San Sebastian.

The stars in the sky there are local,
drifting up from modest houses in Loiola.
They are as close as cats on a sill
and are able to both warm and wound.

Teacher says that when her heart beats,
she cannot sleep, recalling the day of drums--
the Tamborrada, and the clouds that gathered
in search of their pilfered thunder.

During the Aste Nagusia, or Big Week.
La Concha Bay is home to stilt walkers wearing
huge papier mâché heads. The calm waters
are like mothers who knew these giants as babies.

Teacher says that there was a man there,
or a woman, or an enchantment she cannot describe.
Perhaps all three, a trinity born of sangria, celebration,
and one bell beneath the drumbeat, a ringing bird.

On these recent nights, far from the Basque country,
she is startled by her doppelganger lying awake beside her.
The lesson she cannot teach is that neither knew of the other,
though the invitation was always there, a tongue in the bell,

Like an arrow in the flesh of a saint or an invitation 
to La Concha Bay, and the days to be lived beyond it.
_________

for Word Garden Word List--The Book of the Dead
 
Music: Mary Hopkin Those Were the Days



 

14 comments:

  1. Fantastic writing! Way too many lines to quote. Glorious. The 4th and 5th stanzas are especially amazing.

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  2. Beautiful and fascinating poem, Shay. I was especially taken with the second stanza, and went back to it several times, contemplating the depth in those lines.

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  3. The image of the tongue in the bell is so vivid and brings this wonderfully imaginative and immersive poem to a grand conclusion - Jae

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  4. Such a beauty of a poem, full of strangeness that is familiar and the familiar gone strange. I had to look up several of the words, and I must say they add a richness and flavor much like travel itself does for life. I especially like ".. the clouds that gathered/in search of their pilfered thunder.." and of course the sudden and disturbing appearance of the doppelganger. What teacher speaks within us, and who is it that lies beside her if not herself? A poem full of questions with the urgency of lit matches that must be used/answered before they burn out. Once again the bar is launched into interstellar orbit. Just a fine, astonishingly vivid piece, Shay.

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  5. I wish plagiarizing was not frowned upon ~ I would simply repeat Joy's comment .. she is able to succinctly, in great depth say what I feel and am unable to say. [I also looked up a few words, in good company.] Your poem is quite intriguing, splendid.

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  6. Love the "Teacher says" repetition. This makes me remember seeing the painting of St. Sebastian with all those arrows piercing his skin. Yikes. I enjoyed the word list and playing along.

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  7. I am with Yvonne....I, too, love the "Teacher says" lines. And this is my favorite stanza:
    " On these recent nights, far from the Basque country,
    she is startled by her doppelganger lying awake beside her.
    The lesson she cannot teach is that neither knew of the other,
    though the invitation was always there, a tongue in the bell,"

    I don't blame her for being startled. I would be startled too. I am curious about the tongue in the bell though, as it sounds a bit painful!


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    1. The tongue of a bell is the part that strikes the bell to produce sound. It is typically made of a metal material and is designed to create a specific tone when struck by a clapper or hammer.

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    2. Thank you! It makes sense to me now. I never knew the name of that part of the bell. Never too late to learn something new. Smiles.

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  8. As always you have put me in awe of your use of imagery and thought Shay! I too love the repetition of the teacher and the gorgeous description of the place and feelings there. This is a poem to read and fall in love with over and over again!

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  9. I love your use of 'teacher says', and the perfect words and beauty of this poem. I am dwelling on the second stanza.

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  10. "On these recent nights, far from the Basque country,
    she is startled by her doppelganger lying awake beside her."
    I could spin wonderingly on just these two lines for a long time. A poem full of delicious magic realism, Shay.

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  11. I love this poem. Life can seem so normal and yet unknowingly a living Twilight Zone. As always you are the queen of story telling and visual poetry.

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  12. I love this couplet, and its throwaway wisdom:

    "They are as close as cats on a sill
    and are able to both warm and wound."

    And the image of stilt walkers with papier mâché heads. Not to mention the wordplay in your always witty tags, my favourite being - "poems with a Spanish accent" 😄

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