like a rolled newspaper in the rain.
Is that You? in the window box?
Is that You? magnificent in a woken engine?
I don't mean to be sullen,
a crushed flower with a brave yellow bloom--
I'm a vine growing in through the window
of your abandoned holy room.
Oh honey. My fingers flat upon
your smooth chest made of smoke,
I am rain falling ever further from her cloud.
Call me back---use your voice of spade-shaped leaves.
I will come, across the lawns and waters
to kneel at your feet
and sing.
__________
for Word Garden Word List--D.H.Lawrence
Music: John Waite "Missing You"
Gah. This is so gorgeous it hurts. I especially love the rain falling ever further from her cloud.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautifully written poem - so much wonderful visceral imagery and a story wonderfully told. Brilliant indeed- Jae
ReplyDeleteReally a deeply stunning bit of writing Shay, full of all the things you do so well, living and original metaphors, understated but powerful emotions and that sense of loss and yearning that makes the beating heart of a love poem like this. I especially love the 'chest made of smoke' and the perfect image of the narrator's being reflected in those last exquisite five lines at the close.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! (Jo)
ReplyDeleteSo rich with yearning. I too love the "smooth chest made of smoke." The ache is palpable in this beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteI love the 3rd and 4th couplets especially. The image in the 4th one is haunting.
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