Shay's Word Garden: Your Voice

Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Your Voice

Your voice

Is like impossibly blue water--

I want to fall backwards into it

And float, with my eyes closed.

When I have to be away from you,

It is like surfacing into thin and ordinary air--

My only desire

Is to drown again.

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15 spoke through the ouija:

Brosreview said...: AH! Beautiful!; June 3, 2009 5:30 PM
Riot Kitty said...: Don't hate me for running out of descriptive words for your poems like "beautiful" - sorry to repeat!; June 3, 2009 5:44 PM
Kristin H. said...: I would drown a thousand times over for the sound of my beloved's voice.; June 3, 2009 8:05 PM
Mama Zen said...: I love this imagery!; June 3, 2009 8:25 PM
Shadow said...: oh wow, love it!; June 4, 2009 1:45 AM
Kelly Dickson said...: oh anyone reading this, wld start to think ur a romantic or sometfink? tutt tutt... ;) xxx; June 4, 2009 6:00 AM
G-Man said...: Awesome Shay!!!
This could very well be ME and someone I know....G; June 4, 2009 7:53 AM
pheromone girl said...: Falling into a pool of anyone sounds simply divine!; June 4, 2009 10:40 AM
Daryl said...: This is a feeling that I get when the sun is hot and makes me drowsy .. I feel like I am falling into an abyss ... catch me ...; June 4, 2009 11:13 AM
Gerry Boyd said...: perfectly turned; June 4, 2009 12:22 PM
Scarlet said...: How beautifully romantic!; June 4, 2009 5:56 PM
T said...: *smiles*; June 4, 2009 5:58 PM
jinksy said...: Voices do it for me, every time...; June 6, 2009 7:17 AM
nollyposh said...: sighhhhhhh X:-); June 7, 2009 9:14 PM
Mojo said...: Oh, I have sooooo been there. Thanks for this.; April 9, 2010 4:40 PM

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