you are some bitchin virus girl
a tiki queen
slipping in unseen
and i,
in my delirium,
set the curtains on fire simply by exhaling
as my arm falls limp towards the dazed plank floor;
no more
hey,
where are you going?
in my fever dream, you stepped out of the ganga
dripping wet
i know until now
until yet
you haven't quite infected the me you haven't met...
i keep a little chinese box
with my secret name inside,
behind seventeen locks
and a thimble full of pride--
your ivory earrings sway
when you're kissing me that way,
oh,
not there.
not that.
please,
come back.
__________
You are so above and beyond the best at writing feelings - MY feelings - than I am.
ReplyDeleteExcellent post! But I think it would be better with a golf cart...
How did you get the idea for this one? Love it by the way.
ReplyDeleteMany hands make light the work.
ReplyDeleteYou have been kind of whimsical lately!
I'm glad my poems speak to you, PG. :-) As for the golf cart, it just took it a while to finally arrive...check out the next post. ;-)
ReplyDeleteI wanted to get animal, RK. Me and Olivia Newton John. Just another slightly different style to express something.
Well, Lou, I hadn't seen this poem as whimsical, though I suppose you could read it that way. Thanks as always for reading and commenting. :-)
No whimsy there ... what is the opposite of whimsy .. cause that's the park this one is in
ReplyDeletePlease, allow me a, LOL...I love how your writing brings a smile to my face :D
ReplyDeleteAre you talking about the literal death of someone you love in this one?
ReplyDeleteThe poem is about being simultaneously attracted to and desperately afraid of a soul-stealing presence in female form.
ReplyDelete*the Succubus smiles quietly to herself*
And perhaps you also penned The Davinci Code, but had nothing to do with the making of its movie which could not compare to the trunkfuls of thought within the secret chinese humidor of Louvre's promise.
ReplyDeleteduh! i just *got* this! anyway, i love when i need to re-read a poem, this one called me back and i enjoyed it better the 2nd time round... xxx
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