(this is a mirror oddquain)
so
completely
correct you are, sir;
don't get shy now, Pooky Bear...
speak!
so
adorably cute how you
really think I care...
ruff harumph!
speak!
____
for both Imaginary Garden With Real Toads and Magpie 86.
Sunday, October 9, 2011
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34 spoke through the ouija:
Ah! Communication between the sexes.. always a minefield. Thanks for trying out the first mini-challenge on Real Toads.
Egads! *clutches heart* A form poem--albeit an unknown and obscure one only used by Rumanian fortune tellers on Friday the 13th. I love it, and of course, now I have to try it myself. This is rather a dooorbell.
you dont really care?
i am thinking hell might have frozen over...a form poem...(faints)
Oh, you guys!
^^Christopher, don't "comment" on my poem with a poem of your own.
communication it makes or breaks us.
Clever back and forth, and a form that's new to me. Thanks for the introduction.
I think I could learn a form by Romanian gypsies ( I mean)...
Speak Shea Speak!!!
Cool form here! I like!
An oddquain, huh? There's a joke lurking around here somewhere . . .
now I need to get educated and research what a mirror oddquain is...Love the bottom photo!
Love this ~ and it's not a haiku! Oddquain ~ what an odd name! I've learned something new today.
I'm not sure if I should be impressed or insulted ;-)
I adore the condescending tone. I was gonna tease you about the Haikus and now a fucking form, but the gallery has teased you enough. :)
This has me smiling widely! Love it! Quirky form and all it still speaks very truly of an eternal problem - how do you get a man to actually speak? *smile*
Ouch, sweetie you don't have to yell I'm right 'hear'.
I like the form and you did it well with the words and pictures too!!!
You made that look easy! Brilliant :o)
You are in great form today, Shay! (Not that I have ever seen or heard of that form, so now here I go to find out more....but you'll always be my first mirror oddquain.)
So unlike you and yet so strong.... LOve it!
It's probably safer to just keep quiet.
Oddquain? Cool poem. :)
Interesting poetic form on an ever-confounding topic!
Pat
www.critteralley.blogspot.com
I don't know this form--looks fun! And "Ruff harumph" is just right.
Sweet read! One of my characters was all about the pooky cuteness too!
http://drinkthenewwine.blogspot.com/2011/10/faery-judgement.html is my magpie.
Comuunicating the unspoken and unspeakable at times is what poets do well.....and that you are Shay a poet....this one speaks vollumes....love it! :-)
Comuunicating the unspoken and unspeakable at times is what poets do well.....and that you are Shay a poet....this one speaks vollumes....love it! :-)
Oddking or oddquain, sure is a winner!
sparkly
Two for one - I like it!
Clever! Communication can be a challenge sometime. Your poem makes that clear. Nice write.
i'm gone for a couple of weeks, come back to catch up on your blog first and what do i find?
what have you done with, Shay? who are you? Fireblossom's doppelganger? form poetry? haiku???? "Pooky Bear"??? i can't believe it!
{shaking head in wonder}
Fun.
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