Friday, February 1, 2013

A Progression Of Responses Upon Receiving A Love Poem From Shay

  • Wow! Can I read it right now?
  • Wow. Can I read it later?
  • Wow. In a minute. I want to watch this commercial.
  • Wow, I can't stop yawning!
  • Wow. Maybe some time next week.
  • Nice sentence structure.
  • Wow. It has sentences.
  • I read the first sentence.
  • I must have lost it.
  • Get lost, Shay.
  • Zzzzz.
__________

a 55 for the G Man.

24 comments:

G-Man said...

Yes You can play....

brandi said...

You might underestimate the power of your love poems!

G-Man said...

Oh sorry, I'm supposed to respond?

This is obviously Fiction!
No one that breathes and can read English would EVER disregard an overture of affection from you!!

You create from your beautifully Romantic Soul Shay, and if you offer that and it's ignored....
They are way too stupid for you!

You have NO idea how giddy you make me by playing. I appreciate it more than you know.
Thank You Oh Mistress of Mirth.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End.

Oooops, I almost forgot...

PARCHEESI!!!!!

hedgewitch said...

Wow.



*hobbles off rapidly*

Lynn said...

Let's hope this is fiction!

Daryl said...

clearly you sent you love missive to the wrong foolish person ...

ellen abbott said...

you forgot 'quit stalking me!'.

just kidding.

Mama Zen said...

Yeah, this is clearly fiction!

TexWisGirl said...

:)

Brian Miller said...

well if i got a love poem from shay...i would first inhale it...the words are secondary...smiles

razzamadazzle said...

What a fabulous 55! I can't imagine anyone not wanting to immediately read anything you gave to them.

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Wonderful - too funny!

Sioux said...

All I can say is the poem you wrote for ME (not a love poem, I know) is framed and hanging in my writing room...

Maybe she falls asleep now because you write a gross of them every day. ;)

Grace said...

Of course, it is. And I am smiling at your labels too ~

Happy Friday ~

Vesper said...

LOL

And even this, somehow, makes a lovely poem...
xoxoxo

Helen said...

No way any of these could ever happen! Envy the lovely miss who is the recipient of a poem from you ... just for her.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Nope. Not possible. Would never happen. Really funny though!

Cloudia said...

self denigrate much?
Wait! It's an indictment of US, isn't it?!

Your fans & acolytes!


Not acolyte - y enough for you, mz genius poet??? huh?!

Wait - What?


Sending Aloha to YOU
from Honolulu,
Comfort Spiral
~ > < } } ( ° >

Fireblossom said...

It's just a little bit of silliness, Cloudia. You know I love my readers. :-)

myheartslovesongs.com said...

i DON'T believe it! anyone who would tell you to get lost will have me to deal with, Sis!

Hannah said...

Love poems are the ultimate especially when they're juicy!! Creatively so though... I got lost in writing one today and had to pull lines that were "appropriate," for the piece I offered earlier! I don't think people write true love poems to their lovers as much as they should.

Lolamouse said...

The poem you wrote for me is hanging proudly in my art room. Your poems are never ZZZZZ....

Margaret said...

This is NOT Flash Non-Fiction, Shay. ;P

Margaret said...

Speaking of which, I'd love to see a poem here all sentimental and cheezy from you :)

Oh, and thank you for responding on the Cheetah poem. My daughter wrote most of it by herself (I helped a teeny tiny bit - made her read up on them :)

My oldest son is a poet and has a poet's heart. My third daughter loves to play a bit with it as well. She was so thrilled to read what you wrote.