and though some called her "freak",
she was not that. No,
she was an ordinary marvel, much as we are,
us goddesses of the neighborhood--
doing what we will, when left to our own.
Two of her hands, such slender-fingered hands,
such that we all felt a little breathless when she would
smooth her windblown hair back,
were used to do the devil's work--
depending, of course, on which devil's
kids were in school til three, or husband gone
til god knows when, maybe forever--
a devil's work is never done, so they say.
Two of her hands were used to pray,
and when she prayed, the saints themselves sighed
and crossed themselves, forgetting to answer back.
Saint Sebastian no longer felt the sting of the arrows,
and Saint Cecilia lost track of her breathing right in the middle
of her hymn to God.
Prayer can be, should be,
a two way street, and she lit up the lines
at her very first whispered word.
One hand left,
an idle hand perhaps, you'll say.
This hand traced its lineage back to her Romanian high-wire ancestors,
knife-throwers, artisans of every stripe.
She told us once, laughing, that past midnight,
this hand became possessed of magic and did the most astonishing things,
all of its own accord.
I don't know about that,
but what I do know is, she knew how to crook it--
just so--
angled toward true north,
and when she did, on those fine afternoons,
I no longer had a choice, and just like her devils and saints,
I came,
calling her name as if the window weren't wide open
and the seasons, at her bidding, changing gloriously on a dime.
_______
Such a confiding tone to this. I love the last stanza especially, and also the last three lines of the 3rd stanza. I could go on about other parts...but I won't.
ReplyDeleteOh wow, what a great story! I love "us goddesses of the neighborhood". Yes we are! And the breathlessness at the sight of her hands. Simply loved this.
ReplyDeleteoy vey!
ReplyDeletethat is the sexiest back i think i've ever seen in a photo!
This feels like you're whispering a secret, and I'm leaning in closer and closer to hear. Perfection, Shay.
ReplyDeleteoooh, can you introduce me to her?
ReplyDeleteI've read this twice and still sure I missed some nuance--layered, lush and full of the contradictions of the heart and soul, yet as great a summoner as its protagonist--who could not want to hear that whisper?
ReplyDeleteOoh you do paint a killer kind of gal. She sounds scary! All that power in those hooks...you know what they say about 'idle hands'. :-)
ReplyDeleteMe like.
ReplyDeleteAloha - words fail to describe my appreciation.
If one could take Shiva as a lover...
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done. Loved the idea of gods being so enraptured that they simply forgot to answer back. Gave me chills, those words.
You possess some sort of magic, being able to weave such a tale, Shay. Your mind, your mind works in mysterious ways and thank goddess that you have the genius to write about what it conjures, else you might possibly implode. (Music was great, too)
ReplyDeleteall those arms ... must give good hugs
ReplyDeletefive hands ? Is she for Real ???
ReplyDeleteI can tell she can do the best massage for me...tee..heh
She's good at being good, so are you, and I like this- poem, photo, woman, hand...
ReplyDeleteLoved your Quintessential story FB.
ReplyDeleteI wonder how many words a minute THAT chick could type?
You are The Goddess of Romance!
I knew what the five hands were for just from reading the title.
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent poem. I especially enjoyed the final stanza. You're so creative.
Prayer can be, should be,
ReplyDeletea two way street, and she lit up the lines
at her very first whispered word.
So many interesting parts and I have to agree, one leans in closer to hear what is next....
Fleetwood Mac originally did "Black Magic Woman!" Ha! Love it.