run your fingers through mine,
like spirits dancing in fire.
lean over me.
take your time, as the hawk does,
or the gentle mourning dove.
do anything you like with me.
i will stay with you,
just as the native grass leans with the wind,
unable to help itself
and not meant to.
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for Susie's mini-challenge at Real Toads: the poetry of Jim Morrison
really nice!
ReplyDeleteAlright now! Should have a warning: adult material. :-)
ReplyDeleteLovin the tags. And the poem is in no need of any additional comment, but lovin that too.
ReplyDeleteSteamy, love it. Jim Morrison oozed sensuality as does this piece. Thanks so much for participating in the challenge!
ReplyDelete"like spirits dancing in fire" is especially wonderful.
ReplyDeleteWoven with such beautiful phrases...spirits dancing in the fire...the mourning doves...takes me from one mood to another. Love your tags too!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done!
ReplyDeleteVery sensual. The lover gives all of herself. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteShay--This poem brings to mind a summer day. It's too hot to move quickly or exert too much energy, but there's still plenty of pleasure to be found...
ReplyDeleteWhoa-- that was hot.
ReplyDeletejj
Perfect.
ReplyDeleteOh, but I loved this, Shay. You know me and birds. :)
ReplyDeleteI'd rather be a blade of grass flutter in the wind than a mighty oak struggling against it...
ReplyDeleteThat's so beautiful, FB!
ReplyDeleteSizzlin'!
ReplyDelete"just as the native grass leans with the wind,
unable to help itself"
I swooned over that line! Hey I have a post almost all about SEBASTIAN on my horse blog :) Hope you get time to enjoy it.
Charged with passion!
ReplyDeletevery very thought provokingly erotic
ReplyDeleteDo I dare say it? Yep. This is a light my fire poem.
ReplyDeleteKeep your eyes on the road,
ReplyDeleteand your hands upon the wheel!
I just love the disparate things you combine.
ReplyDeleteI like the line "just as the native grass leans with the wind" --such a fitting analogy!
ReplyDeleteThe surrender here is surprisingly erotic. Wonderful, Shay-de-Lady
ReplyDeleteHOT!!!
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