In the time
of the end
of the world,
I walked--
with a lily in one hand
and a double blade in the other,
searching
to the ends
of the earth
I walked.
in the surface
of the stones
on the drown side
of the river,
I saw
you waiting
with a tethered bird in one hand
and a rose ring in the other
in the time
of the end
of the world
you came.
I have the blade to set the bird free.
You have the rose to blood the lily.
there is no time
to save the world
but with the drown side of a kiss,
in the time
of the end
of the world
there is the ever-rising river.
there is us.
there is this.
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The rhythm of every poem you write, the voice of every poem you write, the tone of every poem you write...is different.
ReplyDeleteHITH do you do it?
Gravity. Strong. Simple. Neologistic word play.
ReplyDeleteI feel we are effecting each others' writing.
Sorry about THAT!
ALOHA
from Honolulu
Comfort Spiral
=^..^=
'drown side of a kiss'
ReplyDeleteriver is rising, too, isn't it? ~
'you have the rose to blood the lily...'
ReplyDeletean incantation of old magick for the end times when everything new has failed. I also like the line Michael refers to, as well as the form, which is ballad-like but not, simply itself. Exquisite, Shay.
Wow. I fell into that poem and only came to the surface to fear of drowning. Wonderful work!
ReplyDeleteDelicious!
ReplyDeleteWhat a gorgeous poem. Love the closing stanza, especially.
ReplyDeleteAmazing. I really liked reading your poem. Thank you for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteThis is just about the most perfect love poem I've read.
ReplyDeleteI love it. The last few verses were particularly beautiful.
ReplyDeletePat
Critter Alley
The refrain becomes a chant:
ReplyDeletein the time
of the end
of the world
Very other-worldly Shay.
Lovely and surreal.
ReplyDeleteI love the way this falls. It feels inevitable. Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThis is too beautiful. The closing stanza is so simple, yet, so profound.
ReplyDeletelove, Love, LOVE this, Sis!
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In the time of the end of the world...these lines put a frisson down my spine.The double blade, the lily, the rose...it almost reads like an ancient tale of war, peace, love. You walk like an ancient goddess among the ruin, among the rebirth. The pace of this poem moves along like a an old river, slowly, steadily, inexorably.
ReplyDeleteA lovely piece, there is us and there is you.
ReplyDeleteAh, this is enthralling.
ReplyDelete"I have the blade to set the bird free. You have the rose to blood the lily."
It seems to be a kind of myth passed on, so to be realized. Your end of the world is both scary and fulfilling.
-HA
*sigh* Such skill in pulling out tenderness and beauty amid a backdrop that would seem better suited for tragedy or horror.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely drowned in this luscious poem. Sigh. Gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading very much ... and re-read being captivated by your words.
ReplyDeletein the surface
ReplyDeleteof the stones
on the drown side
of the river,
(I'm having a stones thing going on, so of course, I was struck by these words)
and I just love this phrase:
You have the rose to blood the lily.
this is the crux of the poem, the center point - pivot - and it's the use of "to" that just brings it all home.
a very tight write - a story as old as time, but rephrased as only you can craft.
"I have the blade to set the bird free.
ReplyDeleteYou have the rose to blood the lily."
From this down, made my heart (and loins) thump. So good. So, so good.
Love is never stronger than on the eve of disaster...
ReplyDeletethis one reminds me of Declaration of Love by Carilda Olivar Labra.
Lovely read...and "drown side" of the river is such a great visual.
ReplyDeleteGoodness, do what we will, the most important thing is a moment and arms that wish to never let go.
ReplyDeleteI don't know where my comment went, but I shall try again. This is awesome as usual, and can we hope for more than someone to hold when the world ends?
ReplyDeletedrown side of a kiss - what a cool expression. The whole poem is cool "I have the blade to set the bird free.
ReplyDeleteYou have the rose to blood the lily. Liked the imagery!
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