Down boy.
Not yet.
Did you forget that a woman is a work of art?
With maddening plastic packaging
Protecting her heart of hearts?
Toro, toro!
That's just the way it goes;
I knew you'd love this little red number,
And I love the smoke coming out of your nose.
Pffft, tiger, it really means nothing
That you love my pastry, sleek and tan;
You must worship my sweet custard filling
If you want to be my man.
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Monday, January 23, 2012
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19 spoke through the ouija:
Now I'm hungry.
Custard filling. :) Love it! You're so clever.
You asked for a reminder. It's that time again:
http://rosemarymint.wordpress.com/2012/01/23/monday-melting-week-3/
~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
nice...def lyrical...and true in what really matters...otherwise they get full on the pastry and just make a mess of the filling...
Love the plastic packaging around the heart - more effective than ice! This poem made me smile.
Haha! I guess it's all about animal instinct in the end.
We get all dolled up then pissed if they can't see beyond it. :)
This made my morning!
Push all the buttons, flip the switches, then put the goods in the refrigerator. Otherwise, sticky fingers. Of course, I never minded sticky fingers. (We'll talk later about how I feel about you writing a poem with droolworthy pastry images at this sensitive period in my life.)
I love custard. ;)
plastic covering...custard filling...my my...love it!!
Love custard but we've recently found out that plastics have destructive elements in their make up :-)
Self-absorbed, chaotic, and fast fashion. This video is the very definition of the 80's. Thumbs up. I give it 4 Member's Only jackets out of 5.
I caught a fleeting glimpse of your title as I was getting onto your post and thought, 'Surely I misread that.'
But no...I was underestimating your wit and playfulness with words...something that should never be done when it comes to Shay.
I'd skip the sugary exterior its a distraction,the beauty is indeed in the filling
Oh, my goodness - LOVE THIS.
Sending big hugs to you!
:-D Anna
love the first stanza
What a fun read, Shay. Sometimes I think you have audio at your site. It would be fun to hear you read your poems:~)
Love it! Makes me think of those damn Barbie packages!
my, oh my, little lady! your writing is delicious! {i prefer cream puffs myself, but the filling is the same as eclairs. {smile}
i'd never heard of Lene Lovich ~ her voice reminds me of Deborah Harry (Blondie) ~ love her costume!
♥
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