Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Fem Solo

She's always been different--
a golden-eyed girl apart from the others.

In her hours alone, she talked to the sky and the sky told her:
"Gather yourself, girl. Be still. You will be filled as I am filled."

That was when she noticed the first feather; the first spot.
She fought the strangeness, then invited it bone-deep to take hold.

Her lovers have woken with their arms around a creature
Both beautiful and Other, hidden just behind her kiss.

In her sleep, the messengers come; Joan and Emily on fire.
Don't think she is mad. She is burdened and she is blessed.

Woman, to love her is to love sharpness;
To love her is to fall together down a thousand feet and more.

Still, she is just a girl. She holds more than she was meant to,
and when she shivers, she will seek your arms, her second skin.

She will always be different; cat and bird together--
But if she makes herself yours, she will come to you today and forever,

bearing gifts.
_______

For Mama Zen's "Words Count" at The Imaginary Garden With Real Toads. Kelli asks us to write about our power symbols. She also asked that we do so in 25 words or less, which I just this second remembered. Forgive me, it's not yet 6 in the morning. I hope this will be all right, lengthy though it is. 



27 comments:

Sioux said...

"Oh, I thought you said 'in 25 LINES or less'--I'm sorry."

I love the idea of a cat and bird combined. And the fact that you put the last line all by itself.

So, Shay, you wrote this before 5 this morning? Go back to sleep--leave a bit of creativity for the rest of us. ;)

Jannie Funster said...

the first feather, the first spot. You animal, you! :)

I like the bone-deep seep of this.

xo

Daryl said...

this may take many readings for me to get past the images into the words

Kerry O'Connor said...

When asked to mention some of our fave poets' motifs (over a real toads) I may have picked you and your big cats... I see I was spot on.

I thought this the pivotal line:
Don't think she is mad. She is burdened and she is blessed.

Some women are not as easy to live with us others - as one of the former, I can relate to the notion of being both burdened and blessed at the same time by a rigorous personality.

Mama Zen said...

This is just incredibly beautiful. Thank you, Shay.

Far Beyond The Ridge said...

I love the discovery of the unique, and the embrace of it, the desire to share it.
Lovely shay
Rick

Mary said...

I love the concept of 'cat and bird together.' You seem to have the tenacity of a cat, but the ability to soar like a bird! Enjoyed this.

Margaret said...

"Still, she is just a girl. She holds more than she was meant to..."

Well, that for me is profound. Inside each of us, don't we all feel our "little" selves? And if we don't, then we have lost something very special.



Susan said...

"In her sleep, the messengers come; Joan and Emily on fire.
Don't think she is mad. She is burdened and she is blessed."

O pierce my heart with your arrows of self truth, skin, fur, feather. You are my new GMH:

"I CAUGHT this morning morning’s minion, king-
dom of daylight’s dauphin, dapple-dawn-drawn Falcon, in his riding
Of the rolling level underneath him steady air, and striding
High there, how he rung upon the rein of a wimpling wing
In his ecstasy! . . ."

flipside records said...

This is my favorite line: "to love her is to love sharpness" ... In fact, you could take this line and add a few more words to write a second poem meeting MZs criterion (25 words or fewer).

This is like saying I love being stabbed. I like to press my finger against the tip of a knife, maybe even hard enough to draw a few drops of blood. But at least I feel an intensity that otherwise does not exist.

Also, there is the sharpness of wit and intellect.

I also like all that is implied by the final line, set apart.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Spectacular. I love "a creature both beautiful and Other"......"she is burdened and she is blessed".......your closing lines are perfect and so true. Sigh. Loved this poem.

razzamadazzle said...

All right? No. Wonderful. Yes. I love the complex nature of your characters. They always seem to jump off the page and demand attention.

PattiKen said...

I like this a lot. There is a mix of power, independence, and vulnerability that is a perfect blend for "woman."

hedgewitch said...

No one could ever mistake this for anything but one of your poems, Shay- If this was read to me in a disguised voice, with me blindfolded in a dark room, I would know it for yours. And also, of course, for you. Sharpness enough to love, from the opening lines welcome from the sky, to the final complexity of blent predator and prey, wing and fur, which is so much the gift borne, fine fine writing.

Carol Steel 5050 said...

The lines "creature Both beautiful and bold" and "she is burdened and she is blessed" are magnificent. A wonderful evocative set of images, too fine to be limited to 25 words.

flipside records said...

"the final complexity of blent predator and prey" ... What an excellent observation, Hedge.

manicddaily said...

Vivid portrait - those golden eyes are always a sign! k.

daydreamerdreams said...

Wonderful poem!

Lolamouse said...

This is definitely chock full of power images! The cat, the bird, Joan, Emily, madness....Your poems are instantly recognizable. You have a real voice, and it's one of my most favorite! (and the fact that did this before I even finished my first cup of coffee is just obscene!)

HermanTurnip said...

I dunno...that cat's looking at me like I'm its next meal.

Helen said...

To thine own self be true ... the essence of your poetry, you.

Hannah said...

Oh, your opening and this:

"and when she shivers, she will seek your arms, her second skin."

Excellently done in true Shay form!!!

I did the same thing here at nearly one in the morning though...linked it on a rewrite...

I thought of you for the bonus round... gypsies and railroad tracks, (not sure why railroad tracks), were the first images in my mind but there are many that you've written that stick to the bones! :)

Lynn said...

That's pretty cool. :)

izzy said...

'You will be filled as I am filled'-
Thanks nice piece!
that is what I have been needing, Particularly yesterday...and I got it..
and I usually get it; although I really had to empty out to fill up this time!

Sara said...

If you can write like this at 6am in the morning, everything should be forgiven.

There was to love, like the lines, "She is burdened and she is blessed." "Both beautiful and Other..." "She will always be different: cat and bird together..."

I really liked that you put such total opposites together in this poem. I also liked the "bearing gifts." sitting by itself.

It was good read. Thank you:~)

myheartslovesongs.com said...

i too love the combination of cat and bird ~ she must be full of a very strong magic to have them co-exist within her one body... her gifts must be magical as well.

truly a Shay/Fireblossom gorgeous creation!

{{{meow mix? HA!}}}

Tammy said...

Lovely.