Super super clever, Shea. And cute in the best of ways. Very cute. (In the best of ways.) k. (Manicddaily)
Love that you captured a cat reference in there. Nicely done.
love it, SP!♥
This poem changes my view of autumn forever. Thank you.
I especially love the final verse. Very well done!PatCritter Alley
Gorgeous! I love the clever play on words.
What playful word play! Leaf it to you! (boo)
sweet. :)
Golden!
This is a fun, witty, piece of poetry! LOVE it.
Yes ma'am - that is fiiine
Now this is just perfect!
Not only is the personification brilliant, but I love the way certain lines have multiple meanings. Very cool.
You wrap up October expertly in just a few words.
Really touched the essence of it all here, Shay, and how like leaves we all are ephemeral,falling eventually. A light touch with a heavy payload.
Ha, great closing!
Perfection.
That's it! Three times makes it true (you said it, Mama Zen said, I said): October is sooo freaking Sexy!
Oh! EXCELLENT!Poetry begins in delight and ends in wisdomRobert FrostWords are, of course, the most powerful drug used by mankind.Rudyard Kiplingpoetry is a state of grace, before and after culture. Juan Ramon Jimenez If you haven't had at least a slight poetic crack in the heart, you have been cheated by nature. Phyllis BattelleALOHA from HonoluluComfortSpiral =^..^= . <3 . >< } } (°>
sigh!!! embracing autumngracias
Great word play Shea! That cat connection is clever!Hank
"Your blackcat ways..." Whoa! Reeeeooooowwwww! xo
Oh my. la petit mort and um the other one. Succinct and sobering.
So true of FALL, but also a fun read, especially the last stanza.You sound good:~)
So clever from he very first lines, a perfect capture of the season.
playful and good.
That was a fun little romp - thanks!
Clever!
Spirit, what do you wish to tell us?
Super super clever, Shea. And cute in the best of ways. Very cute. (In the best of ways.) k. (Manicddaily)
ReplyDeleteLove that you captured a cat reference in there. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletelove it, SP!
ReplyDelete♥
This poem changes my view of autumn forever. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI especially love the final verse. Very well done!
ReplyDeletePat
Critter Alley
Gorgeous! I love the clever play on words.
ReplyDeleteWhat playful word play! Leaf it to you! (boo)
ReplyDeletesweet. :)
ReplyDeleteGolden!
ReplyDeleteThis is a fun, witty, piece of poetry! LOVE it.
ReplyDeleteYes ma'am - that is fiiine
ReplyDeleteNow this is just perfect!
ReplyDeleteNot only is the personification brilliant, but I love the way certain lines have multiple meanings. Very cool.
ReplyDeleteYou wrap up October expertly in just a few words.
ReplyDeleteReally touched the essence of it all here, Shay, and how like leaves we all are ephemeral,falling eventually. A light touch with a heavy payload.
ReplyDeleteHa, great closing!
ReplyDeletePerfection.
ReplyDeleteThat's it! Three times makes it true (you said it, Mama Zen said, I said): October is sooo freaking Sexy!
ReplyDeleteOh! EXCELLENT!
ReplyDeletePoetry begins in delight and ends in wisdom
Robert Frost
Words are, of course, the most powerful drug used by mankind.
Rudyard Kipling
poetry is a state of grace, before and after culture.
Juan Ramon Jimenez
If you haven't had at least a slight poetic crack in the heart, you have
been cheated by nature.
Phyllis Battelle
ALOHA from Honolulu
ComfortSpiral
=^..^= . <3 . >< } } (°>
sigh!!! embracing autumn
ReplyDeletegracias
Great word play Shea! That cat connection is clever!
ReplyDeleteHank
"Your blackcat ways..." Whoa! Reeeeooooowwwww! xo
ReplyDeleteOh my. la petit mort and um the other one. Succinct and sobering.
ReplyDeleteSo true of FALL, but also a fun read, especially the last stanza.
ReplyDeleteYou sound good:~)
So clever from he very first lines, a perfect capture of the season.
ReplyDeleteplayful and good.
ReplyDeleteThat was a fun little romp - thanks!
ReplyDeleteClever!
ReplyDelete