wrong to the core, for they never saw your bed with its
invitation to deep indigo.
Van Gogh, smitten mad for you,
sublimated in paints what he felt and could not bear.
(So I like to imagine, my body stretched out among the stars.)
So clever you are, or careless--
half covered like a moon in transit across a narrow window.
You know I'll go to the breezy sill,
lupine and soft-coated, leaning for silvered water and finding
delicious madness in the warm curve of the offered half
of your celestially gifted ass.
______
for Karin's "Going Halvsies!" challenge at Real Toads
lovely!
ReplyDeleteI love the blue, but I can settle for pink if you like :-)
ReplyDeleteHa--invitation to deep indigo is a highly memorable phrase as is the whole poem, one imagines quite a great window here, with the moon peering in (or out). Take care, and thanks much for participating in the prompt! k.
ReplyDeleteWell... I think you said it all... any question would be moot :-)
ReplyDeleteZQ
Oh Shay, this is such a lovely poem! :D
ReplyDeleteVan Gogh, smitten mad for you,
sublimated in paints what he felt and could not bear.
(So I like to imagine, my body stretched out among the stars.)
Its so utterly beautiful..! :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Yes, the Van Gogh verse is wonderful. The whole thing is so colorful and sensual.
ReplyDeleteMy goodness, lady! This is unbearably awesome!
ReplyDeleteI did not see this "half-ass" coming. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem, especially about "celetial asses" Wonder what would happen if there were more in the world...
ReplyDeleteLovers are especially beautiful by moonlight.
ReplyDeleteI was breezing along enjoying the lines - "lupine and soft-coated" - wow! - then got such a kick out of the closing line.
ReplyDeleteTales half-told, and half a moon, half a Van Gogh masterpiece...yes I think you cut to the heart of the concept of halves here--two do make a whole, don't they? I have never been able to find out.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, romantic, artful...sigh
ReplyDeleteLMFAO! LOVE the ending Miss FB! too cool for mere mortals!
ReplyDeleteenjoyed listening to Janice too.
what are the odds of both of us using Starry Night on the same day? (i just wish my poem were 1/10th as brilliant as yours!!!)
{whimpering as i crawl away "why does she have to be so fucking fabulous? why can't she write one shit poem every so often... but noooooo, she has to be exceptional .every. frucking. time.....merde!}
♥
Sizzling! (And Janis was a nice bonus.)
ReplyDeleteSizzling! (And Janis was a nice bonus.)
ReplyDeleteThis is great.
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