Saturday, August 29, 2015

Poet In Fuckyou Face

Observe:
the poet in fuckyou face.
haiku
haiku
haiku
haiku
rant
haiku
deletion
haiku
haibun
grocery list
sex story
manifesto
American sentence.

Aughhhh!
pain.
pain.
I guess you know what you may do with your very rude comment,
suggesting that I do not understand the English and how she is spoke.
Observe:
the poet in fuckyou face.
tears.
wailing.
gnashing of teeth.

haiku haiku.

That's better.
You may now kiss the hem of my

haiku

garment.

beret.

oh yeah.
_______

for Real Toads mini-challenge: Ekphrasis. "The Artist In His Studio" is by Rembrandt.

My computer seems to be working for the moment. Hopefully, it won't flake out again right away. We shall see. 

19 comments:

TexWisGirl said...

thanks for the laugh!

brudberg said...

Ha.. haiku rant is something quite unique.. but I see your point.

Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP) said...

I think Bjorn has named your new form haiku rant ... :)

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Love this - brilliant take on the prompt :D

hedgewitch said...

Pain pain and ranting deletion hold the world under their sway--and rude, so rude the comments, upon the troubled face of the cyberwater. But really--what does this have to do with the picture??? *runs*

Helen said...

JESUS! Just as I was ready to compose a few haiku ~~~~

Mama Zen said...

Intriguing!

Cloudia said...

Beret! Raspberry no doubt.

I loved this scat poem!



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Kerry O'Connor said...

For a rant, this is pretty succinct.

Susan said...

At times I find myself in front of a blank screen exactly as you describe here.

Marion Lawless said...
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Other Mary said...

Funny,"fuckyou face"
poet contemplates haiku
five more random words


myinnerchick.com said...

haiku has taken on an entirely new, interesting meaning, darling. xx

Isadora Gruye said...

Excellent follow up to a very awesome title. Somewhere, Henry James is proud, confused, and itching his palms. Viva la

Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil said...

Theeeeeee trippiest response to this challenge!! Had to read it out loud to my husband, who just shook his head knowingly when I got to, "beret." Oh yesh!! Love your irreverence. Amy

Susie Clevenger said...

I have the poet fuckyou face when I am asked to write rhyme... lol Love this!

Lolamouse said...

"The poet in fuckyou face." Love, love, LOVE it!

De said...

"and how she is spoke."
you rock. thanks for the smile.

De said...

I wanna scream at the whole world today, so I had to come over and read this again. Tellin' everybody to "kiss the hem of my haiku garment. beret. oh yeah." right now.

Thank you again for this.